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Reviews for Our Paths Cross Again

By : slygriff21
  • From ANON - angel on December 13, 2005
    i hope mione can tell him .... please please more .this id great ...later for now

    angel
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  • From slygriff21 on December 13, 2005
    Hey guys!

    I'm replying to the last review left by firewall. I appreciate your honesty. Your comment didn't upset me at all. I'm trying to inprove my writing with each story I do.

    Also, I want to thank everyone for the great reviews. I'm glad everyone is enjoy the story. I will be wroking on chapter 8 later tongith and hope you guys enjoy it!

    Keep the reviews coming!

    Tiffany

    a*k*a

    slytheringriffendor21
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 13, 2005
    Ch 7 - I just want to make a general statement that I hope won't offend you. I've noticed a general improvement of your dialogue in this story. It seems more natural and not as formalized. It's probably all the writing you've been doing. Nicely done.
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  • From Angie30 on December 13, 2005
    Excellent!, There is definetly something deeper going on with Hermione, I hope Severus can help her. Can't wait until you update again.
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 13, 2005
    ohhhhhh getting good.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 13, 2005
    man poor mione .. i hope the spells in the book work ... please please more ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Jess on December 13, 2005
    I love this story. I can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Aurora on December 13, 2005
    I like the story and i can't wait to read more! However, I have one nit-pick. . .i think you mean vial- a container, usually class, to hold things in- vile means bad/detestable, etc. Keep up the good work, though. ~A
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 13, 2005
    omg omg, what happens next! Oh man she kicked his butt there for a min.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on December 13, 2005
    Wow! that was some fight! Those two definetly have a lot of pent up anger towards each other. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - your sister on December 13, 2005
    Oh wow.. This story has caught my attention very well. I like how you are writing it. I really can't put into words how I feel right now. Hope you update again soon.


    Love ya
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 12, 2005
    Actually this chapter didn't *suck* at all. You shouldn't feel you have to apologize for your writing. It is yours and it is personal, you have just chosen to share it with us. I thought the chapter moved things along somewhat but more importantly, it filled in some background. You are now ready to move along and take us with you.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on December 12, 2005
    No this chapter doesn't suck, its great! Glad Severus knows what she went through the first time with those three. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - angel on December 12, 2005
    wow ....how did she survive the first round of avery, lestrange, and lucius please please more ..in cant wait in till then next update .. keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - megmarie on December 11, 2005
    please keep writing... I don't give a damn about grammar or any of that, but i do tend to be disheartened when a story that starts off so well never finishes! good job thus far.
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