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Reviews for Going Back

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  • From Shellnet on November 07, 2017

    Someone finesh this the author abandend it 


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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on May 19, 2008
    When are you going to update continuo Going Back? I have been waiting for ages and ages and ages for it to be updated continuo! Have you abandoned it when I mean abandoned Going Back I mean left not to continuo updated! Have you hope you haven
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Lola_Lola on January 08, 2006
    The problem with this story is that it is written in first person. For some reason, these always seem awkward to me. Take this line for instance

    "'I want one!' I cried" If someone was telling a story in first person, I hardly think they would say "and I cried!" It is just wierd to me.

    However, I will continue reading but I highly encourage you to rewrite this from another view point.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 07, 2006
    Great idea for this fic! I'm having alot fun reading it ,as for houses, maybe Syltherin for Kenz and Ravenclaw for Jamie.
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  • From Angie30 on January 07, 2006
    This is a fantastic story! Very well written and you have peaked my interest into what will happen next. Keep up the great work and I look forward to an update.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 17, 2005
    please please more i cant wait in till they meet the parents please update soon...keep up the great and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2005
    anon. this story is not written in first person p.o.v.
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  • From ANON - Simone on December 12, 2005
    Great Story!!! I really do hope you keep going with it!!
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  • From slygriff21 on December 12, 2005
    This is an interesting story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - serket on December 12, 2005
    This story seems very promising. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on December 11, 2005
    Excellent start! Can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - K on December 11, 2005
    YAY update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    ok loose the first person, make the next chapter and all chapters after third person.

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