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By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 19, 2005
    I'm thinking it's Blaise. Or was it Theo's way to spend time with Draco? Oh I need chapter 5! What happens next?
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  • From ANON - avihenda on December 19, 2005
    sweet chapter. Liked it :-)
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  • From ANON - Me on December 19, 2005
    Sorry you aren't able to take a little criticism! I'm sure you'll delete this one too. But I still stand by what I said before, they are way OOC and you need a beta.

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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 19, 2005
    good chapter. Wondering who the stalker is. please update soon
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 19, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 14, 2005
    You did an excellent job of weaving the info about the rape into the story. I feel like you answered my questions personally. Sorry about that. As a teacher, I often think about questions to answer from text and predictions about what will happen next. I wish I could make my students do it, too. Anyway, I predict that Blaze will be the culprit, but you could fool us with Nott. But you kinda gave away the action in your story by having them plan it out in their thoughts, unless you plan on having that as the plan and someone, maybe Jaimie, foul it up. She seems to be a bit of a Seer - she's worried about exactly what you have planned for Harry. Let's hope the Dursley's will convince Draco, if Jaimie doesn't, that Harry would never leave his daughter and that he has to find him if he is taken. Also, how about mentioning the potion or spell that was used to make Harry powerless for his rape as part of the abduction scene. And remember - you don't have to answer any reviewer. It's your story. After all, it's on my must read list, so its good.
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 13, 2005
    Love how quickly you update. Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Storm on December 13, 2005
    Great update. Can't wait for more.
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  • From avihenda on December 12, 2005
    nice start. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Keep them comming

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  • From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on December 12, 2005
    ooh cooL!!
    I wonder who was the rapist: theo or blaise? hmm...
    By the way, its Zabini, not Zambini...still a minor error tho! Its ok :D
    I saw other authors make it :D
    I LOVE this story! and you're so good at updating!!
    Thank you!
    update soon!!
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 12, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 12, 2005
    So the rapist is either Theo or Blaise. Not good. I hope Draco is smarter then this person thinks. Harry would never leave them. I hope Harry is smart enough to show the threats and things to Draco. And Jamie... there is no way that little girl could be turned against her father. She adores Harry! Can't wait for chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on December 12, 2005
    Very intriguing, so either Blaise or Theo has a lot to answer to. Blaise's last name is ZABINI, though. I've never seen a story that had the Dursley's being so redeemed. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - LadyX on December 12, 2005
    so it was either Theo or Blaise...*ponders* which could it be? I've never seen a fic with a bad Blaise so i am assuming it is Theo but hey if you want to be difffernt...cant waqit for more
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 12, 2005
    YAY!!! More soon please!
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