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Reviews for Long Time Coming

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - Rachel on December 12, 2005
    Ok, I like it a lot, but I do have to ask you to review the whole thing and possibly rewrite a few parts... for instance, you had me believing Harry
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  • From ANON - joey on December 12, 2005
    Cool chappie. I came back to the and and there is an update to this great story. I am glad they found each other but I have a feeling it is going to be a bit "bumpy" sure they made up but I think other things are going to get in the way. Like those "bad men" Jamie is worried about I wonder if they are wizards and not from Harry's work. Anyway great job update soon
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 12, 2005
    That was wonderful if not a bit fast. Harry just accepted him back. I would have thought it would have taken time. Don't get me wrong I love them together. I really adore Jamie. Chapter 3 please!
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 11, 2005
    O.K. Who raped Harry? I think that will be important in this story. Wouldn't they have found some evidence of the assult when they were searching for Harry? And how do the Malfoy's know that Harry can survive childbirth with the potion if no one has before? I don't think they know about Jaimie, or they would know about Harry. I'm glad they want Draco to be happy. You're getting right into this story pretty quick.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 11, 2005
    So who raped him and gave him the potion? You made it seem that Lucius knew all about it and the child. Need chapter 2! What happens next?
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  • From ANON - Googly_Eyed_Starlet on December 11, 2005
    interesting premises! I love these "Harry left with child" plots.
    I had a question however. Do Draco's parents know that Harry's pregnant?
    "They didn
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  • From WynterRose on December 11, 2005
    *Cries* i want more! please! I will do just about anything to read more right now....just so you know....
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 11, 2005
    Please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on December 11, 2005
    could be interesting.. i love harry left stories with plot... :)
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  • From ANON - joey on December 11, 2005
    Wow so who was it that raped Harry?.... BTW it is spelled "raped" not "rapped" Anyway I feel bad for Harry but I am glad the baby is Draco's. It wasn't Draco that raped Harry was it? I suppose it was someone that was actually trying to kill him but create a powerful wizard they could control. Also did Harry change his name? Do Draco's parents know that Harry was going to have a baby or are they just thinking that Draco could have an heir using the potion? This is very interesting please write more.
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  • From ANON - Brittany on December 11, 2005
    aww, thats sweet. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on December 11, 2005
    I love it.
    Please update soon. I hope this isnt a oneshot
    bc that would make me very sad... :(
    update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    I love the way u have the story goin hopefully ur not one of the author that start a story n never update...update soon
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  • From ANON - ladyX on December 11, 2005
    this looks promising. cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - Storm on December 11, 2005
    hmm You seem to have a lot of good fics in the works now. I like this, it has a promising beginning. I also like how you worked the Dursleys into it. Very interesting.
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