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Reviews for Once Upon a Time

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - alix on January 19, 2006
    OK you said in earlier chapters that Harry read about veelas and knows magic... so why wouldn't he know that he could give Draco children? I really like your stories but sometimes they are not consistant. You say he knows about something and then later it seems like he doesn't. Anyway I still like the story but try not to make Harry into a wimp. Update soon
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  • From ANON - Nita on January 19, 2006
    AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more can't wait for more. its bin soo long keep up the good work better be more on your other stories too. naywayz keep on writin!
    -Nita
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  • From ANON - asdf on January 13, 2006
    "...the veela in me..."-draco
    HAHAHA! Had a good chuckle over that one. Language/grammar isn't too good, could use a beta. Overall good effort.
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  • From ANON - elecktra on January 04, 2006
    That was excellent!! I'm sooo loving this story! Please update ASAP!!!!
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  • From ANON - Julie (again ^^;;;) on December 27, 2005
    Yeah... if only I didn't make mistakes myself while recomending to someone that they get a beta... heh ^^;;; Sorry about that... it's three AM at the moment ^^;;;
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  • From ANON - Julie on December 27, 2005
    This is a very good story; I really do enjoy it, but perhaps you would consider getting a beta? Sometimes it's easier for sometone who didn't write the story to catch mistakes... I don't mean to offend you or anything, there are just some commas or letters missing throughout the story... just a thought.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 26, 2005
    Oh I agree with Severus and Lucius. Tom won't stop. Need chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - Bethany on December 24, 2005
    I love your story. The plot is awesome but the grammer is kind of distracting. It bugs me when I have to stop reading to figure out what word you meant to type. You might want to consider getting a beta. Please don't think that this is meant to be a flame, it's not. I just think that your story will flow alot better if you had someone double checking your work.
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  • From ANON - Nercomi on December 23, 2005
    YAY an update, pls keep going this is REALLY, REALLY good.
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  • From ANON - jay on December 23, 2005
    good stuff dear keep it up !!!
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  • From ANON - Blue on December 23, 2005
    aww that was a cute chapter
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 23, 2005
    aww they are so cute together
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 23, 2005
    good chapter, bye
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2005
    Really good story update soon!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 14, 2005
    it was a good chapter. The only problem was that it felt a little bit rushed (just constructive criticism, don't like flamers either), need to take it a bit slower and go into more details. But good chapter, i love this story please update soon.
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