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Reviews for You made me...

By : Bebedora
  • From feistyorange on February 20, 2007
    Please, Please, Please Update!
    I need to know what happens!!!!
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  • From ANON - jw on January 09, 2006
    interesting i like to see where it goes
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  • From ANON - Angel on January 08, 2006
    could cera less about Lucius feelings when poor Harry ios surreing and I want Snape

    this should ofcourse say:

    could care less about Lucius feelings when poor Harry is hurting and I want Snape


    Like I said, my spelling is horrid too, and my keyboard is always messing with me. Stupid keyboard! ;)
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  • From ANON - Angel on January 08, 2006
    Oh don't you just hate "get a beta now"-people when you already said your sorry about it? Well I know I do. I agree with you, don't they like it then don't read.

    I for myself don't care about grammar or spelling if the story is good, and this one is. This could be because I'm not american or english and therefore suck at it myself but honstly! If people can't handle some misspellings and grammar mistakes they shouldn't be reading fanfiction at all... I'm going to get in a lot of troubble for saying it but hey it's my opinion.

    Now on to the story. I really like your long answer to my review. It makes me feel special ;) and it makes me wanna review even more. I liked this even if I'm not fond of "side"-stories and I could cera less about Lucius feelings when poor Harry ios surreing and I want Snape there buggering him and loving and... *blush* ehm... well you know what I'm talking about... but my guess is you have a plan behind all of this so I will put my seatbelt on and enjoy the ride.

    I like the lullaby, really nice. I also like the fact that you will keep Snape as Snape (because Snape do have a soft side in the books too in my opinion! *bites everyone who don't agree* ;P )

    Hmm what more did I want to say? I'm not going to curse you, if I did how will I get my story? I am thinking about kidnapping you, shackle you to my bed and make you write more every single day... but (un)fortunatly I'm not that cruel. I like Voldemorts little speach even if I'm not a huge fan of letting the man get to much attention *growls at Voldie* I like how you made Hermione. But shouldn't she be more devestated that she thinks Harry is pushing himself off the deep end?

    And to the most pressing point... the sex! I need sex, and lots of it ;) gimme gimme gimme! *lol*

    /your devoted fan, Angel
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  • From ANON - manx on January 08, 2006
    This could be a great story if you get a Beta (your word usage is atrocious!) and you stop over-explaining things. Just get on with it!!
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 20, 2005
    January? But that's to long! I want a nother chapter now! yes I know... don't push and stuff but this is good. Really good. And I can't pinpoint something I like the most because I like it all. It's so full of Angst I'm nearly ripping my heart out. But Hedwig?? Oh no... that is so sad!

    Sense your up for suggestions I can just give you hints on what I don't like in a story. Snape can not be fluffy (and I think your picture of him was great. Like the coffie thing even if I picture him more of a tea person...) and I need more angst. I would have Harry surviving because of his magic... like when he blew up his aunt... something that just happens.

    I just hope I get an update sooooooon, and you really do have a fan here!
    *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Ari on December 20, 2005
    Oh! That was so confusing, but sad. You have to keep updating, hopefully sooner than last time.
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  • From ANON - Lothirielwen on December 20, 2005
    Dang!! Some start you have there...
    Hope you are able to update again before long... looking forward to seeing where you are going to go with it
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  • From ANON - DamedeMort on December 20, 2005
    Umm, your not gona kill harry,Are you? 'coz that would Kinda end the Fic premuturely.
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  • From ANON - Sophia on December 20, 2005
    I really like this story and I can't wait to read more. I really want Harry to get his revenge; I really want to kill Dursley (Vernon) right now. Keep up the really good work and please update soon.
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  • From nightrose on December 13, 2005
    wow....
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  • From ANON - Redemption on December 13, 2005
    OMG! I've read a lot of broken!Harry stories, but this has an amazing start. Keep writting, I'll definately be reading.
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  • From ANON - Elaine on December 13, 2005
    Okay......that was a bit more angsty than I've read in a long time, but I'm not saying that's bad. I like the story so far. So much I can't wait for the next part. I have to know before I continue to read this however, you do intend for Harry to have a happily ever after and all that rot right? I read a fic that was leading into him getting recovered and all that and then Draco(or lucious i dont remember ^_^) killed him. I'm very open minded. I like angst along the way to a happily ever after because when isn't there? Please update soon. I love your writing.

    ~Elaine

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  • From ANON - witchinghour on December 13, 2005
    WOW.....Incredible. Some grammar issues, things that could have been worded better, but overall I truly enjoyed it, and hope very much that you continue.
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  • From ANON - hp_reader on December 12, 2005
    That was pretty intense - I could just about feel how much it hurt as I read - hope there is an update soon.
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