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Reviews for Dark Marks and Manicotti

By : faithmisplaced
  • From ANON - Evermist on December 27, 2005
    Awww!! That's so sweet! I just read another of your stories, uh, forgot what one, now, but you should make this a series! The other story said to tell you if that's how we felt, and I say you should!
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  • From ANON - moi on December 23, 2005
    *cries* the end was so adorable! the last paragraph makes the entire story. wonderful job.
    -moi
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  • From ANON - avihenda on December 23, 2005
    so cute~~~~!
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  • From ANON - yanic on December 22, 2005
    this is excellent, any more planned? or just this one chapter? I'd love to hear more about the pair...
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  • From ANON - jay your senior on December 22, 2005
    OH AMAZING !!! TEARS EVERYWHERE !!!
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  • From ANON - Brittany on December 22, 2005
    aww, that is so sweet!!!!! great job!!!
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 22, 2005
    Finally. I'm not sure I like Ron either. Too bad things got so bad for our hero's in your story. But the ending was nice, not that the story wasn't, I just like fluffiness. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Cheery on December 22, 2005
    Great story, you should really write a sequel. I would love to know whether they survive okay and whether Ron will get what he deserves which is a horrible fate.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on December 22, 2005
    Oh my god, that was amazing! Please tell me you're going to do a sequel?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    Please DON'T make a sequel! I'm sure how this must sound, and I promise that I'm not trashing you (I actually quite enjoyed this), but give me a moment to explain. It's rare to find a one-shot story that actually makes sense without giving TOO much background information. This is beautiful JUST the way it is; to make it any bigger would be to devalue it entirely. Start another story, or write your sequel as a separate post. You're a good writer, but like I said, this is fine just for what it is.
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  • From ANON - Rena on December 13, 2005
    You know, if Harry and Draco let such a bit of trash as Ron to use them as a doormats, they deserved everything that had happened with them. Maybe, the perspective of trying to survive on the streets will clear their brains and they will took their lives back in their own hands and put Ron on his place.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 13, 2005
    Oh continue! Do they find safe shelter? Does the wizarding world realize their mistake? Before it's too late? What happens next?
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  • From ANON - Alexa on December 13, 2005
    Beautiful. And I want a sequel so bad! Please?
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  • From ANON - Yhitzak on December 13, 2005
    VERY well done, my friend! It's so rare to find a good story in this fandom, anymore, let alone one with a plot. Besides that, it's rare to find a one-shot that can truly stand alone. This was sweet, intelligent, and your structure DIDN'T make it painful (in any way) to read. Kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - fnw on December 13, 2005
    Sweet. ^__^
    This demands a sequel. Perhaps after the baby is born and Ron gets a good shot to the head?
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