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Reviews for Earning a Name

By : Talin
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 03, 2006
    Does he go in? Did Harry have a child? Need chapter 14! Wanna know more!
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  • From ANON - Rachel on January 03, 2006
    Draco seems an OK guy and Harry definetly has problems... I worry about what he will do to Draco. Is that necklace a slave one? He will hurt Draco so bad...
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  • From ANON - Alison on January 03, 2006
    A nusery? What manor are they in? Godric's Hollow? Or did he buy someone else's house or build new? Inquiring minds want to know. =o)

    Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 03, 2006
    I love yhis story!
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  • From ANON - The doctors In on January 03, 2006
    Yes these scene breaks are irritating at best and look to me they could easily be solved by the affamed paragraph. Stay true to your story and dont worry about the reviews unless they have constuctive suggestions in the improvement of your story. Use your paragraph to flow from the thoughts that you just expressed to show one thought moving on to another. The scene break prevents this from happening. Looking at how another author does this can sometimes be helpful. Writing down on a piece of paper what you want to happen in a chapter is a good way to help your story flow together and yet keep from straying to far away from your original theme. Remember to make clear what your characters are thinking and why they do what they do and how they feel about what is happening around them. The doctor.
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  • From ANON - nickel on January 03, 2006
    Scene-breaks? Bring them on, so long as they keep the story going. >u/
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  • From ANON - nickel on January 02, 2006
    What's happening?!!! Please go for Chapter Thirteen soon!>0/
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  • From ANON - TabooDesire on January 02, 2006
    A collar! How kinky and just so fucking sexy! I really hope it comes with a chain to yank him around. Mmm. The ideas...
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  • From ANON - TabooDesire on January 02, 2006
    Blah! Short! But do I see Mr. Potter having a change of heart?
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  • From ANON - Haylie on January 02, 2006
    this chapter was not only great but was a good length, enough to hold my attention but not long enough to bore...great job!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 01, 2006
    What is he having made? He had a collar made for Draco? Can't wait for chapter 13!
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  • From ANON - Mew.. on January 01, 2006
    Wow, the pendant and the necklace sound so pretty..
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  • From ANON - San on January 01, 2006
    Oh, I really like this. I hope you are going to continue it soon. Want to know what will happen next between Harry and Draco.
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  • From ANON - xillien on January 01, 2006
    Good start of new year with this new chapter. I like this story much!
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  • From ANON - avihenda on January 01, 2006
    this feels like a filler chapter...
    cute how harry is in semi denial ^_^
    I hope we don't have to wait to loong for the next chapter, not enough harry draco interaction in this chapter. although there was loads in the last ones.... so I guess that conpensates
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