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Reviews for The Ultimate Christmas Gift

By : Ravenx
  • From amaltheanie on June 22, 2009
    awwwww, cute! *squee*
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  • From ANON - Meia on December 27, 2005
    And as always u do know how to make a reader want more stories out of u cuz u are just that awesome when it comes to writing them. *Sighs* Alas it such a sweet story and it hit u at every good part and besides I knew Draco could be a big softie when he wanted to and yes Harry makes a very nice uke and to be honest I kinda prefer him that way.
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  • From ANON - FlintLover on December 26, 2005
    It was so soo SOOOOOOOO cute!!!! I LOVED it!! More more more, I need more from you!!!
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  • From GML on December 21, 2005
    Wow! *grin* Harry gave Draco a lap dance! Yummi!! And then they both got lucky! Now THAT'S what I call a Christmas gift! Excelent fic! *applauds*
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  • From ANON - Neko-chan on December 20, 2005
    aaaaaawwwwwwwwww!!! how cute. lol it would've been hilarious if Za,bini actually DID get to sneak a kiss on harry before he realized what was going on. xD YAY DRACO! good thing he decided harry had suffered enough...otherwise i might have flamed you........xD if they didn't make up and have steamy make up sex afterwards.lol
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  • From ANON - Mya Malfoy on December 17, 2005
    I love this story! I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stories. Please, keep 'em coming! (hehe... pun VERY much intended!)
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 15, 2005
    I loved the theme. I'm also glad that the Slythirins were more concerned with Draco's happiness than in tormenting Harry. That was a very nice Christmas gift. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - kash on December 15, 2005
    The plot is good and you have done a good job. However, you keep alternating the tense between past and present which is keeping me from voting your story (I am a member of the yahoo group). A bit of polishing will do wonders.
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  • From ANON - scully on December 14, 2005
    good job! i enjoyed it. good sexy bits. :) you should keep writing. damn, i wanted to smack pansy, tho. glad draco came to the rescue! :)
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  • From ANON - DraculUnknown on December 14, 2005
    Beautiful! I absolutely love it!
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  • From ANON - aprillily on December 14, 2005
    I liked the story a lot. Sneaky Slytherins! ;D

    I did struggle reading it, though, because you skipped back and forth between past and present tense. You didn't say in your author's notes if you had anyone beta this for you, but I would suggest doing so. The story is good--I loved Pansy, and how Draco turned possessive, and how gentle they were together--but it just needs a bit of polishing. If you don't have someone to beta for you, I'd volunteer. Just let me know.

    Overall, though, good job!

    aprillily
    aprillily@livejournal.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwWwwwwwWWWWWw
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  • From ANON - tas on December 14, 2005
    Just found your little fic. Sweet and just right for the Christmas holidays. It could have turned out so many ways, but I'm glad you ended it like you did.
    ~tas
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  • From MagicChic82 on December 14, 2005
    This was cute! I enjoyed it!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on December 14, 2005
    Awww almost too cute to be true. Bless Harry he makes such and adorable bottom and I am so glad that you have him bottom because he's top far too often. I hope you do soome more Harry Draco work!
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