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Reviews for A Game Of Chance

By : sadsally
  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on May 11, 2007
    You scared me!!! I thought he was going to die!!! Then he didn't so I don't have to give you a verbal slap. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - EviL on August 11, 2006
    BEST WRITER EVER! Keep it up
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  • From Darkplaygirl on July 28, 2006
    Angst+Fluff= one bloody hell of a read!!! Three Irken finger WAY up!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on June 04, 2006
    Some forget that the beauty of well-written pieces are that the grammatical aspects tend not to matter. Read the masterpiece 'Angela's Ashes' by Frank McCourt if you don't believe me. Your fic was wonderful, and it's very rare to find a snarry fic with such an emotional snape that is actually believeable. To be honest, I enjoyed it too much to even care about grammar. Don't take the mean hearted reviews to heart. If they're opinion really mattered, they'd offer to beta for you.
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  • From ANON - Sophia on June 03, 2006
    I really liked this story and I would definitely read another Snarry of yours. Yes, it was very fluffy, but I love fluffy stories, lol. Keep up the very good work with all of your stories.~Sophia
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  • From ANON - rubydragon on December 21, 2005
    so................. sev makes harry better?? from love? is that what's happening? i'm lost........ >.
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  • From sevtheimpala on December 19, 2005
    Snape is a brick
    Fart
    He is the one
    The only one
    Who has a brick when he farts
    He is a brick
    Fart

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  • From ANON - Ari on December 15, 2005
    Looking it over, you have a lot of formatting mistakes as well as misplaced commas and tens mixups. I would look for one who is good at that sort of betaing. If you are willing to wait a bit, I may be willing to do a bit as my break is coming up, but I tend to be more formal than a fan fic writer and do not like pure smut which this piece does not seem too bad at.

    It is apparent on a thorough reading that your grammar is not wonderful, but I did not realize it when I was just reading it for enjoyment.

    Good start, especially if english is not your first language.

    Always,

    Ariyana
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on December 15, 2005
    I thought this was really good I like the plotline and can't wait to see Harry's recovery. However I may just suggest that you clean up the grammer etc a bit here and there bceuase it became a little hard to follow here and there? Do you have a beta? Either way for your first Snarry fic I thought it was pretty good, better than mine was *winces* well done
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  • From ANON - Silje on December 15, 2005
    Please add it! Please, please, please! I want to know what happens next! The first part was really good! I truly enjoyed it, so please put the next part out. Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - NightShade on December 15, 2005
    Yes, it's so good, I love it... I hope Harry won't die... Severus's point of view is wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Ditzy on December 15, 2005
    This is really great I love your writing style. I do think that you could do with a beta and if you want me to that I would be more than willing. Though it is absolutly brillliant so far.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 15, 2005
    You are an amazing writer! What can I say, I love the way you capture his feelings (even if it is ooc) and they way I'm taken in by the most unlikely story. I mean how likely is it that everyone knows he will give Snape a blowjob and how likely is it that Ron cheers him on but it works here. And coming from me that is saying alot. I am too picky with HP/SS stories for it to be good for me. It's not normal for me to enjoy "fluffy all lovvie Snapie" but here I do. (see I even think this story us fluffy!Snape you can see I set my standards high)
    I'm looking forward the end of this and all the stories I hope you will give us in the future.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on December 15, 2005
    HI, I want the other half ASAP, Ilive this fic. It's new and I want to know if this love making will save Harry or if he will be dying loved. I hope the first will be right!!!! But it's your story and I will like it as it will be.
    Thanks Phoenix 5

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  • From ANON - JJ on December 15, 2005
    That was wonderful! Let's have some more!
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