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Reviews for Amo Servo Fulcio

By : blacksails1329
  • From ANON - lita on February 04, 2006
    I am soo enjoying this story!! I so can't wait for the next chappy!!! Your doing a great job on the story. Update ASAP!!!

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  • From ANON - als on February 03, 2006
    this is a really good start but it's frustrating you havent updated for so long. where have you been? i want to know what is going to happen and you holding me in suspence. it really isn't very nice of you. please post some more chapters soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 29, 2005
    I'm fond of bonded against their will stories, so I'm looking forward to this one!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 29, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 7! What else is on the list?
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  • From ANON - Amessis on December 28, 2005
    Well done again!
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  • From ANON - person on December 28, 2005
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 28, 2005
    hahaha poor them
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  • From ANON - brittany on December 28, 2005
    love the update
    i'll be sure to check out your other stories
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  • From ANON - cara on December 28, 2005
    great chapter....but we need.....................more..................................smut!!!

    good luck on the next chapter! =o)
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  • From ANON - AkaiTsume on December 28, 2005
    A nice start, but I noticed a few things that you might want to watch out for in the future: You never really gave a real reason for the two to be bonded, other than "it would help in the war." I would think that to impose a bond that would last an entire lifetime with the two bing completely unable to be apart more than 3 hours...would be somewhat drastic without a truly firm cause, especialy Dumbledore. For all he knew, he could be ruining their lives...and if he did it purposefully to get them together, it seems rather unsubtle for a master manipulator like him.

    The only other problem was the tendency to "tell" rather than "show." A story is always more interesting if you let the readers discover things through time and experiences rather than by having one character sit and explain everything; ie, Dumbledore's explanation about Veela. You might want to avoid that, because it usually gives a story a bit more...heart if you show them what happens instead.

    On a good note, since I'm really not trying to flame you, I LOVE your characterizations. I feel sorry for Harry already, and I can't wait to see how his "relationship" with Draco is going to go. Snape and Narcissa also felt right on the money, and I'm wondering how Ron and Hermione are going to take the news. Please continue, and I look forward to reading more from you.

    -Akai
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  • From ANON - Jake on December 28, 2005
    yes that was a long authors note. I like were the storys going but I wan't som Harry Draco action. Update asap
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  • From WynterRose on December 28, 2005
    i like this story. i can't wait for more of it
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  • From foxygirl on December 28, 2005
    Ick! math... Anyway... Love it!^^ Keep going strong!
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  • From MagicChic82 on December 26, 2005
    So does this mean it will be up by New Years? I hope so! I hate people who are as slow to update as I am! ;)
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 26, 2005
    Oh holy moly! That would explain Harry's reaction to Draco! I need chapter 6! What happens next?
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