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Reviews for How To Lose Your Virginity in 10 Days

By : dizixete
  • From ANON - Karmen on December 22, 2005
    Really good! The third chapter is really good!I am enjoying this fic really much! I am anticipating the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2005
    continue this!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
    I LOVE IT, WRITE MORE
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  • From ANON - Kris on December 19, 2005
    I understand that English is not your native language, but you really need to get a beta, or at least run a spell and grammar check in Word. It is good for a laugh though.
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  • From ANON - 0o0itznitelite on December 19, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHA... DAT SHITT WUZ FUNNIEE... U REALLYY NEED TO UPDATEEE... LOL
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  • From ANON - Karmen on December 19, 2005
    Oh! I like it!! I like it a lot! Please update soon! I am so excited to read more!
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  • From ANON - Mami Chula on December 18, 2005
    Wow! That is so hot. Keep going I like this teasing game.
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  • From ANON - shadow on December 18, 2005
    Awesome Story!! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From Silvereyesgoddess on December 18, 2005
    I love it.
    Keep going. I would love to read more.

    *~.:Silvereyesgodess:.~*
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  • From ANON - Stacy on December 18, 2005
    That was good!!!
    Update soon!

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  • From ANON - Anna on December 18, 2005
    ooh this is good! It's funny. I want to know what she says with the veritaserum. more please!
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  • From ANON - anon on December 18, 2005
    You really need a beta, there are lots of mistakes for example "closed" instead of "closet" in the second chapter. Choose a tense, wether its past or present--don't jump between the two. Your story is very difficult to read because both are constantly mixed, even with in the same paragraph.

    You have a good story idea here, its not original, but its really hard to come up with something original, and I know it takes guts to write something and post if for the rest of the world to read, but you really need to have somebody revise this beforehand.

    I hope you keep writing.
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  • From ANON - mona on December 18, 2005
    i am very interested!!!!! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 18, 2005
    Alsome dude! or Dudet whatever, nice begining!
    Not bad I didn't see any spelling mistakes.
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  • From ANON - TNgirl on December 18, 2005
    Good start! Let's see some more!
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