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Reviews for BONDED Part One

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  • From toads70 on June 01, 2007
    loving it please update!
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  • From ANON - brittany on December 30, 2005
    really good story so far
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Hambares on December 21, 2005
    This seems so sad. Will things get better? Is Severus in a relationship with Remus? Is Harry in one with a Weasley?
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  • From ANON - Fairyfloss on December 21, 2005
    Good start - is Liam their son as well, that Harry had after he left? I hope they get back together..
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  • From ANON - killjoy on December 21, 2005
    why the hell is sev with remus? ick. harry and sev forever. they better get together soon. and we know they don't really hate each other. i hope there will be lots and lots of yummy angst! ^_- *wink*
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  • From ANON - liza123 on December 20, 2005
    Interesting beginning. Although you could have put both chapters together and still had a short chapter.
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  • From ANON - sunako-chan on December 20, 2005
    rough sex... kinky~
    troy is in shock! omg! more happy snarry please~
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  • From ANON - lilith on December 20, 2005
    Your story is great so far, but the editing needs some working over. More paragraphs, for example. I know its partly affnets fault, but storys are much easier to read with good editing.
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  • From ANON - Mashell on December 20, 2005
    Things are getting interesting.
    I find it hard to believe that Harry
    would run out on his son, but so far
    the reasons as to why he did what he
    did are good. I hope you keep up the
    good work and please don't make Harry
    or Snape the bad guy in this. I hope it is
    all just a big misunderstanding. Anwyas I
    can't wait to read more. -Cheers - Mashell
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  • From ANON - manx on December 20, 2005
    Good explanation. I can hardly wait for updates. Did they love (or care about) each other at all in the past? Oh, poor Remus!
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  • From ANON - Manx on December 20, 2005
    Oh, forgot to add something. They were bonded in 1996, so Harry couldn't have been pregnant in 1995. Troy should have been born in 1997. (Harrys birthday is in July and he wouldn't have been 16 til July of '96)
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  • From ANON - manx on December 20, 2005
    If Troy is 14 in 2010, then he was born in 1996. It follows then that the parent who carried him became pregnant in 1995 when Harry was only 15. The other child then was born when Harry was 21 if he is now 9. So why does Troy not know who Harry is?
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  • From ANON - sunako-chan on December 19, 2005
    o my goodness. thats not good. what next?~
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  • From ANON - sunako-chan on December 19, 2005
    o my goodness. thats not good. what next?~
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  • From ANON - Hambares on December 19, 2005
    I want to see where you are going with this. Will Severus and Harry get back together? Will they even like each other? More please!!!
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