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Reviews for Future Parents Program

By : avari20
  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2006
    I think that this is one of the top ten best Hermione/Draco fics that I have ever read. I like the whole planned parenthood thing, and the fact that you gave them a girl to raise instead of a boy. I don't know if Draco would be the same with a boy. Keep up the great work and update soon.


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  • From ANON - sheedy on February 05, 2006
    I'm really loving this fic please update soon.
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  • From Chavela25 on February 05, 2006
    That was so great. I can't wait for the next chapter. It was all so good. Can't really picj out one part that stuck with me except to say that it was all good.
    Isa
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  • From Marvinroom on February 05, 2006
    Love it please keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on February 05, 2006
    The kiss.. or lack of it, thank *you* for puting malfoy in right timing!

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  • From tikiguy10 on February 04, 2006
    Oh and if you would not mind would you please email me when you update...
    Tikiguy10@gmail.com
    Please and thank you
    Annabell
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  • From tikiguy10 on February 04, 2006
    I just got done reading this story and it's just like wow... It swept me away... Price of Knowledge and Tin Angel and Observations of a pureblood deputant and Dowry of a single Galleon and now this. these are all my favorites and it just swept me away... i can't wait until you update again because this story is so awesome and i showed it to a friend of mine and she loved it too. Update soon please.
    Annabell
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  • From ANON - Amethystique on February 03, 2006
    Brilliant! I'm hoping that Harry Will get together with Luna. More PLEASE? Mail me when you update? LOL ;o)X
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  • From ANON - pinktribechick on February 02, 2006
    OMG!! This one had me laughing the first time around - but now that you've touched it up a bit - it's even better! And the mental picture of Ick in mini-Slytherin outfits is just TOO CUTE!
    As is the mental picture of the boys in the bath/pool with the babies . . . and the picture of Millicent chasing the boys, along with Ron defending Pansy's honor - PRICELESS!
    Keep up the amazing work - you've got a wonderful piece on your hands! 8~D
    More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2006
    That was a great chapter! it was fun, not to mention hilarious!! i cant wait for mor chapters!
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  • From ANON - UKK on February 01, 2006
    OMG I LOVE YOUUUUU!!!! lol. I can't wait for the future chapters and mayhaps the angsty stuff about herm's scars if it ever comes up. Good luck and I hope your muse gets you on a high!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shellz on February 01, 2006
    I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your story!!!! Please update as soon as you can!!! ICK is just so adorable!!!!! I also like how you're rewritten that last chapter. It flows much better now.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on February 01, 2006
    OMG I love your fic!!!!! And yes Draco has gone barkin'. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ari on February 01, 2006
    LOL at Draco, but, oy, poor Neville!!! And it sure loks like Draco's not the only one making a few realizations...Ron defending Pansy's honor? Very cool. And this new improved chappy 11 is bloody brillant too!!!
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  • From ANON - firewall on February 01, 2006
    Ch 11 revised - I like the changes you made. Your chapter flowed in a more cohesive way and as such, made a great deal more sense. You also added significant parts that made your plot more interesting.

    I love Luna here.She is still an off-beat character but you really show depth of character. She represents here society's single mother and is doing a wonderful job of it. She takes responsibility. I hope her role in the story is expanded upon. She and Harry would make a great couple...afterall, he looks to love the kids. And speaking of Harry, I am so enjoying his joie de vie right now. He has embraced life and can finally just enjoy himself and he is.

    Draco is a hoot, a hot hoot. He has accepted fatherhood and his comments are hysterical. Don't change him. I can't wait until he and Hermione are battling the colours of house with Ick's clothing. And I hope she is able to continue to bond with Ick and hasn't been set back in this relationship.

    This is a great story and is so infectious to read. I love it. Now just one little correction to make. When you revised, you moved your timeline into Monday and the beginning of classes has started. Later when you have the boys and the kids in the pool, you have Draco feeling relieved it is the weekend because he doesn't know how he would balance Quidditch, classes, etc with Ick. He's done it and done it well. I know this was just an oversight because this section of the story wasn't changed much.

    Carry on and I think you made a wise decision to revamp your chapter because it improved it immeasurably and will be a much easier chapter to build upon. Well done, as usual.
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