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By : avari20
  • From ANON - Bek Allen on February 01, 2006
    lmfao!

    That was brilliant! I'm glad you "unkilled" Snape, I really do like him as a character. This was even more hillarious then the last time I read it. Please keep updating and update soon!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - ShortieGirl on February 01, 2006
    I really like the changes it has a much better flow now. You have the best sense of humor!
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  • From ANON - Nightwine on February 01, 2006
    I simply cannot verbalize how much I've enjoyed this fic so far. It's so incredibly humourous whilst being naturally so, not sounding forced. It's such a brilliant plot idea!

    I did read both versions of chapter 11. I thought the additions were great, really moved the story and gave more depth. And I can't help but imagine Luna's point of view when the boys all suddenly appeared, running down the hall with the children :) Too funny. Just thought I'd note a conversion overlook, when the lot of them are in the bath, Malfoy is thinking about how hard things have been and speaks of it being the weekend yet, when it appears you converted the day to Monday.
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  • From ANON - Jess on February 01, 2006
    This story is bloody amazing it so cool and its heaps easy to follow. please please please please update sonn or i will surely die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but away from the dramatics i just can't get over how good it is please please please please wait haven't i already said this... anways you get what i mean lol (I'm not crazy)

    Luv Jess

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  • From ANON - er... on February 01, 2006
    Didn't Snape used to be 'late'?

    As in dead
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  • From ANON - ladyknyght on February 01, 2006
    I'm really enjoying your story. !!!! Write more soon
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  • From ANON - NAR on January 31, 2006
    Nice, I really liked the Draco/Ick dynamic and the insight on how the rest of the school handles the FPP and how Draco works Ick into his life... though I think it could have been better developed and the new chapter has no flow. It's choppy and I think it needs to be edited more. There's no buildup into each part, they just happen. For example, Millicent had some development to it, but it was disconnected. Quidditch practice was uneeded and felt like it was thrown in there as filler. Had no real purpose to it, at least none which I could discern.
    What the hell had she fed the child, anyway?
    Did Draco not feed her in the Great Hall earlier? Then you can't say that, can you?
    And.... BLAISE!!! I'm sorry. I love Blaise in fanfiction. Edit some more, but keep him around. Ah, how I love Blaise so.
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  • From ANON - violetshimmer on January 31, 2006
    Oh.....my god.
    HOLY CRAP
    that was the most AWESOME thing I have EVER read.....beyond belief. You have no idea how hard I laughed throughout the ENTIRE thing. And it's not even one of the stereotypical stories either!!
    Wow. You are AWESOME....
    I cannot even tell you how amazing you are....
    I love your writing to DEATH
    Please let me know when you update; this is way too good to pass up

    just...
    wow.


    you are amazing.

    (I feel like i'm repeating myself. but that can't hurt!)

    LOL


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    awesome chapter. the redone version is great. :) i really enjoyed the whole slytherin and ick aspect.
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  • From ANON - Maela on January 31, 2006
    I wasn't too sure about the premise of this story when I first started reading, but you've won me over. Update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Jo on January 31, 2006
    This is one of my favorite stories...it's really nice how well you make your humor work. Many times humor in these romance stories can come out either sounding stupid or completely out of character...great job at the character work and dialogue especially. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on January 31, 2006
    aww i hope u update soon
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  • From ANON - Onee Chan on January 31, 2006
    nice story. believable among the others ive read...but "late Severus Snape"? he died? i thought he was spoiling Ick future in the first chap? just clarifying...please continue the fic, its really a good read

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  • From ANON - Kaida on January 31, 2006
    *giggles* omg this is SO good, and so origonal! i loveeeeeeeeeee it much! write more!!
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  • From ANON - LeAnn on January 31, 2006
    Oh such a great chapter! I can't wait to sind out what happens!
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