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By : avari20
  • From ANON - slouchyduck on January 07, 2006
    lol, my favorite scene so far has got to be ron hauling ass for high ground with pansy on his heels. i almost fell out of my seat picturing that one.
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  • From ANON - Truth44 not logged in on January 07, 2006
    You've got me again. I'm loving how this whole thing is progressing. Very realistic. And I can't help but wonder if Harry's in love with Hermione. That would make things more interesting, but also harder for Draco. I absolutely adore Ick. I love how her name is like the first thing Draco said when she was first "born." She's so attached to draco to; will she and Hermione ever get a chance to bond.

    ANd omg, the stuff with the mirror...

    OMG OMG OMG!!

    What's Draco going to do?!

    Update soon!
    Truth
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  • From ANON - kayko15 on January 07, 2006
    I laugh at Malfoy. He's so love struck. Anyway. Love this story. UPdate soon. Later. K15
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  • From RiddlesNovice on January 07, 2006
    Great chapter again!!!!
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  • From ANON - meg20 on January 07, 2006
    a brilliant way to get a real kid!!! Love Narcissa's prancks and so glad that Draco took Hermione with him to the mansion. Pansy chasing Ron cause he screwed up and they got twins is totally fun!!!
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  • From ANON - gyrlfrend on January 06, 2006
    Wow! That last part was just great! Definitely a more serious tone, but I still loved it. I liked how Draco realized he was in love with Hermione. Definitely can't wait to read more and find out what he intends to do about it. I have a feeling he'll get Mummykins to help him out :)
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 06, 2006
    Ch ? - I know I've probably said this before but I love your story. It's humourous, witty and fast-paced. You also take twists and turns that are least expected. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - Kristal on January 06, 2006
    Oh my!
    Please upadate soon!!
    i loved the dialouge btween Draco and Mummykins!! haha so funny
    mucho luv
    Kristal

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  • From ANON - sailormoonhannah on January 05, 2006
    oh poor Draco!! I dont want him to be sad!!! this chapter was AWESOME!! you ROCK!! PLEASE update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    WOW! I LOVED THAT CHAPTER! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - bob on January 05, 2006
    dear god!!!
    THIS STORY IS SOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!
    I almost started to cry in this last chappy......but I know you'll make this a happy story.....just so that all your readers don't find out where you live and haunt you........or you could be mean like that and like to torment others.
    Anyway.....Your sense of humor left me in stitches......I'm still laughing over some parts....jolly ranchers.....I never ever thought of them that way.
    Oh......this is some conductive criticism.......I know that nothing is flawless.....and I hate saying anything bad.....but the grammar needs just a little bit of work....other than that.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
    Unfortunatly I can't write cute fluffy stories.....mine always end up dark.....although I have a good sense of humor.....I still tend to write dark stuff....le sigh =_=
    anywho....keep up the awesome writing!

    ~bob~
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on January 05, 2006
    awwww its got me teary eyed at the end well cant wait till more chapters come out till then ttyl
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  • From ANON - Izumi on January 05, 2006
    Geez... I really love this Fic~ Please update soon~
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  • From ANON - NAR on January 05, 2006
    You nearly gave me a heart attack when I read my inbox. 8/9, I thought you meant 8 parts of 9 finished. I started to flip out and was inconsolable and brooding for a good twenty minutes before reading this.
    Thanks for the linkage and you're putting them out faster than I can read them!
    It's amazing how you do it all so well- from comedy to tragedy. The transition is smooth and flawless. You have the whole spectrum equally well (hope this makes sense. I haven't had much sleep, forgive me). It wasn't very dark which I liked (though I do enjoy darkfic, it regular darkfic wouldn't go well in conjuction with the rest of FPP), you preserved the feel of it and developed the plot and character further. Though what I really enjoyed about FPP was the break from the all the angstangst drama drama bliss drama angstangst out there, the chapter is excellent. Hermione is much more supressed in this chapter and I think you need to make her a little more stronger and proactive. The imagry in the last bit was very well done, but perhaps you could make it a little more vivid?
    Draco calling his mother "woman" bothers me, just a tad, but maybe it's just me. Doesn't seem like him to be so disrespectful and flippant to his mother. And tiny error with his father's name. Lucius, no "o". I'm a stickler for spelling.
    Brava.
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  • From ANON - jen on January 05, 2006
    i love it! it was a FANTASTIC idea to have the mirror showing the worst fears! ive never read that ANYWHERE before
    GREAT JOB

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