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Reviews for Future Parents Program

By : avari20
  • From luvhp on October 17, 2007
    wow, that was a fabulous story! Even without any smut ; )
    Whilst reading teh baby Project several reviews made comments to tis story and I just had to read it, thankfully it was FINISHED! I'm reading so many WIP that I can't remember half of them anymore, LOL>
    I loved that you paired Ron/Pansy and Harry/Luna! Wonderful job!
    And what can I say about Draco's Mother?? ROTFLMAO!!! Greatness!
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  • From ANON - accio on October 07, 2007
    Hello, Ava. I finally had the time, internet connection and computer availability to read your story that had been on my "To read" list for faaar too long.
    I must say I enjoyed it a lot. It made me laught, it made me cry, it made me wonder.
    But overall, it just left me with this warm feeling of having read something tender and nice.
    Lovely story... and I hope the Chinese version goes OK too.
    Love,
    accio
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  • From ANON - Genevi on October 06, 2007
    This story is really a beautiful one with all the romance and humour need to make it memorable. The only regret that I had found in it is that a had such a good time reading it that when I finish it it just seem to rapid, soon, sudden!! But I wouldn't want you to add to it or change it for any reason because it was just perfect the way it is so... Hope to see another "chef d'oeuvre" of your soon or someday!!
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  • From ANON - arieskami89 on July 17, 2007
    Just want to say that this is one of the best fics that I've read in a while. Very emotional and very well put together. I truly enjoyed reading it. Kudos on a job well done!

    I'll be sure to read all of your other fics as well.
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  • From myangeldraco on July 13, 2007
    I'm reading chapter two, sorry if this confuses you. I've never heard of the forks, its 'giving the v'- two fingers, or the middle finger - I'll let you work that one out. RE - Ron's finger gesture to Malfoy. generally the v means 'fuck-off', and the middle finger means 'up yours'. I bet that was really really interseting LOL, sorry I just had to set it straight.
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  • From PsychoKitty on May 25, 2007
    it was so nice to see that you finally completed this story! It actually had the perfect ending! I loved the whole thing and you did and absoultly amazing job! Can't wait to read your next masterpiece!
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  • From ANON - Liana on March 13, 2007
    I just wanted to say around the part where the babies turned back into dolls i actually started to cry because it just seemed so emotiional lol awesome story and great job
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  • From KayTeeJay on March 12, 2007
    Yup I was so right, one of my favorites. *sniffs and grabs a tissue* I am such a sucker for happy endings :-) Thank you for a lovely story.
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  • From KayTeeJay on March 12, 2007
    OK Chapter two and I'm still convulsing from the giggles ("I want grandchildren." HAHA I reacted just like Draco did when my mom told me this not too long ago). This is great, I can already tell it is going to be one of my favorite stories on AFF. :-D
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  • From ANON - vonHardenberg on January 27, 2007
    Excellent!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2007
    Ick and Ack..lovely.
    I have been searching for this story since AFF.net went through that big revamp and was down for a month or so.
    Today i was looking through the latest list and someone had written a story of a similar idea and one of the reviewers reccomended this one. I'm so glad i finally found it and could read teh last chapters!
    This story is truely wonderful. Do you archive it elsewhere?
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  • From ANON - Shellz on December 02, 2006
    I really enjoyed your story! I've been checking for updates all year and have not been disappointed once!
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  • From ANON - Adrienne on December 01, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It's so sweet! There's not really much to say other than that it's amazing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2006
    hi.

    well I want to start by saying that I really like this fiction, in fact its become a favorite. It has comedy, romance, dialogue, and the characters are true to the books, something I feel is very important for a fiction to have. You're a great writer and storyteller.

    But, I think that the story up to this point begins to wobble a little bit. I have a few comments about this chapter. It's a little random in Michael's introduction in the story. He doesn't seem like a necessary character and at this point is a Mary Jane type, perfect in every which way. Once he is introduced the whole story seems more like a soap opera than a harry potter fanfiction.

    I don't favor the way Draco written to act in this chapter-- personally, I think Draco would use verbal wit than physical force. It's those two things that bothered me most about this chapter. Don't misinterpret me, I think your storywriting is lovely, but the plot needs a little work. The plot very strong at the beginning of this story, but you see it start to weaken in this chapter. The introductions of characters are somewhat blunt, such as the Greek monster and Michael. My suggestion would be to introduce one and stay with it. Use that to continue your story. Everything else (character development, dialogue, etc.) is very well done.
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  • From ANON - Lrndng on November 29, 2006
    I'm sad its over .... but it was an awesome awesome story
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