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Reviews for Future Parents Program

By : avari20
  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on December 22, 2005
    sweet lol cool
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  • From ANON - Stacy on December 22, 2005
    Good start!
    You idea is so original!
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  • From ANON - Samira on December 22, 2005
    I defintely like it!!!!
    I like your style and how's the story is developing!

    It will never be too soon to read the rest!

    Samira
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  • From ANON - Daniel on December 22, 2005
    That was a wonderful chapter. I hope the next chapter will be soon too.
    Thank you for taking my comment seriously! and thanks for letting me know about updating, I hoep you will be doing so in the future too.
    "Someone who had apparently never seen a hairbrush before the Yule Ball and from the looks of it had managed to lose it again immediately following. " that was priceless just like the last 3 paragraphs, so Draco's mom going to sponser the program or something like that?
    Cheers

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  • From ANON - adriana on December 22, 2005
    at first i didnt think i would enjoy this story because of the summary. however i started reading and i really do like it. i can not wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on December 22, 2005
    Sounds really really interesting. I am so excited to see where this all came from. I hope you update as soon as possible. This sounds like it is going to be really great.
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on December 22, 2005
    this sounds interesting keep it goinng im very interested
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  • From ANON - Kenda on December 22, 2005
    Well you've got me intrigued so please don't stop there!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2005
    It sucks that you started with the ending...
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 22, 2005
    Prologue - Terrific beginning! I was looking for a new Hr/Dr to read and this one has definitely made it to my list!
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  • From ANON - Loz on December 22, 2005
    Wow this is a great start. I can't want to see what happens weldone :D
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  • From ANON - lix on December 22, 2005
    I rarely review, but this sounds interesting.

    Unlike the other reviewer, I don't think doing Italics is necessary, you did have at the top that this chapter is the prologue.

    Now I'm really interested because Vivica is only 3, and the program started 5 years previously, so... did Dumbledore hand off those terrible -screaming plastic babies like they do at some high-schools?
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  • From ANON - daniel on December 22, 2005
    This is a wonderful beining and it sounds like a very unique story to be. I cant wait for the next chapter, please say you are going to update soon!
    A bit of critism: when you do memories or "past" between "now", can you maybe to it in Italic, because its really hard to understand when the memory begun and when it ended.

    Update ASAP!
    If you can send an email when you update it will be great!
    DSL
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  • From ANON - LeAnn on December 22, 2005
    OPh how interesting. I can't wait to find out what started the whole class and how Draco and Hermione had a baby together. Update it soon!
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  • From ANON - fleur on December 22, 2005
    EVIL CLIFFIE! NOOOOOO YOU MUST UPDATE!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!
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