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Reviews for Welcome Back James

By : LeoZodiac
  • From ANON - Kagaya on December 31, 2005
    Yay..Harry is rescued. But I think Crucio is to light a punishment for rapers and would be rapers.

    Happy New Year. I hope you have a productive (you can read that as more chapters/updates/stories/writing) year.
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anita on December 30, 2005
    Hmmm....I don't know what to think about this story. I do like the idea of James being alive and all, but the way he has come back in the 'real' world and the reactions of other people....It's just a bit to OOC. Especially Harry, the boy just found out that the woman he always thought of as his mother, is not his mother and that Snape is his father. I would expect more shock on his part, a lot more shock and anger.
    Take the time to write a chapter and give your characters more emotions becoming of the situation.

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Wildfire on December 30, 2005
    ok.. well you have a great idea going. But everyone is SO out of character. Harry would FREAK if he found out his dad was alive or Sev was his dad. HE WOULD not be HAPPY to know Sev was his dad. If Lusius saw James a live he would NOT just ask, how are you here? And I doubt James would just say it's a long story. You made it like everything's hunkydory and nothing really matters. And while I could see the Dursleys hurting Harry they would never admit they do it to Strangers. And they'd be VERY pissed that someone was in their house. Furthermore if two men can have a baby in this world I DOUBT people would be Homophobic so I SERIOUSLY doubt his friends would leave him. You could have them be uncomfterble with him but they wouldn't call him names! You didn't explain how Harry saved Sirus as they all said he was dead. And I'm sory but you need to do better with the everyone's friends they just pretended not to be. That doesn't even beggin to make since. Snape and ALL the Mafoy's ARE Slytherin, their for they ARE manpulative and they look out for their well being first most of the time. It does not mean they have to be evil though. So really I guess all your problems in this story would be fixed if you kept the characters in charcter as people don't change over night.
    I'd like to end with that I DO really like the idea of your story it's a very good Idea and you do explain some of it like how James was alive, that did make since. Please don't take this as a flame as it's not, it's critizing it in hopes to make it better. I hope this helps.

    wildfire
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 29, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 3! Draco was willing to go to Azkaban to protect Harry! How wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Dezra on December 29, 2005
    Voldermort never told anyone including Lucius that he had James at his manor? Very smart, probably knew that someone would have tried to rescue him. It surprises me that James recoverd so quickly after 16 years as a prisoner. I actually love that Harry gets his father back. Draco seems so supportive and in love with Harry. I hope that Ron and Hermione get what's coming to them for abandoning Harry. I'm enjoying your story, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sahira on December 29, 2005
    Nice start..keep updating:)
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  • From ANON - angel on December 29, 2005
    wow .. that was great please please more ... i would love to read what will happen next .. in tillthen keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel

    ps please update soon ... bye
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 29, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - BadAss1 on December 29, 2005
    So far It GREAT and I can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Amessis on December 29, 2005
    Well done! Really enjoying this.
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  • From ANON - alix on December 29, 2005
    great story!!! I am impressed on the twist you put as to how james is still alive. One thing in the second chapter Sev was thinking about not being able to have more children. But you said something about both he and Lucius being infertile I think you meant to say James but i am not sure. It would make more sense if it was James. Anyway great story I so like the Harry/Draco stories. The ones where Draco is protective but don't make Harry into a wimp. But he will most likely be a bit jumpy after what his uncle did. And Hermione just had to call him a "fag" I do hope they can do something about that. I hope the Weasly's are still ok with him being gay or al least most of them. Update soon
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  • From ANON - Jamie on December 29, 2005
    I like it and i hope you continue it
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 27, 2005
    Oh holy moly! Poor Harry! Can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    WTF?! HOW could Hermione DO that to Harry! He WAS the first person to befriend Hemrione! And she KNOWS it! Without Harry, Ron never would have anything to do with Hermione! Since according to Ron, Hermione's a Miss. Little-know-all! As for Fudge-WELL NOW he has a lot of explaining to do to James! Since obviously Fudge either failed to read the records or didn't care!
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  • From ANON - Bella on December 26, 2005
    oooouuuuu it waz jus' gettin guud
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