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Reviews for Out of the Silent Planet

By : moirasfate
  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on January 31, 2006
    Moirasfate, honey, you make Auntie a very happy woman. Oh, what a complex tapestry you are weaving, and how I'm enjoying following all the threads. I'm wee bit suspicious though... is Hermione pregnant? Oh, don't tell me, if she is, don't spoil it, I'll find out with everyone else. I'll have you know, though, I'm bouncing with anticipation in my chair, (which luckily has been oiled and no longer squeaks!). Love the sense of disorientation you threw into the train journeys. And the achy knee. If you ever need any advice about achy, creaky knees, I'm your woman. Since I have one. My son likes to ask why I keep Rice Crispies in my knee (shudder). I tell him it's purely for entertainment purposes, party tricks, and so on. I digress. I'm waiting eagerly for the next installment, and I just know it will be good. (claps hands and wriggles excitedly.)
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  • From on January 30, 2006
    I just want to say I love your story. It is very well written. Please continue. The actions of the characters are quite true to form. PS. I may not always review each chapter but I am here :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2006
    Very very great chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)
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  • From ANON - apple_blossum on January 30, 2006
    I'm always checking for updates of this story since I adore it so much and then when I see an update I *SQUEEE* madly and am sure everyone around me thinks I'm deranged. I really like this chapter and didn't think it was boring at all. It's good to see Draco getting back into his old self. I hope to read much more of their adventures in Italy. Who is his "friend"..is it Blaise? Will he really be getting another arm? Cuz poor Hermione, I'm sure she'd have a lot more fun in the sack with Draco having two arms and not just one...you know better leverage and all.... hehehe
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  • From ANON - Darian on January 30, 2006
    Transitions are a necessary evil in any good story but honestly because you set Draco up to be unpredictable I found myself after every sentence waiting for him to do something extraordinaryly DRACO! This chapter was as pleasent to read as the one before and the one before etc.....Poor Hermione at the edge of her seat! I can imagine those little wheels in her head spinning fast and furious! Torn between wanting to smack the wanker senseless or throwing herself at his feet screaming " WHIP me! BEAT me! Make me write bad checks!" Wait a minute that's what I would do if I had Draco!*Evil Laugh*Cest la vie....what can I say I am TWISTED.....Update soon! We're WAITING....oh for your Beta get better!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Christina on January 30, 2006
    Another great chapter, of course. Your descritpton of these places are so vivid. Have you ever been to Italy or Norhtern Italy for that matter? Because your descripition of this place, makes me think you actually have lived there. Transition chapters are always a little slow, but a necessity. I thought it was still a good chapter and intresting seeing Hermione get a little jelious. Good Job!!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on January 30, 2006
    I did enjoy this very much. I liked this chapter, very Draco. Hermione's reaction to everything in the shop was very cute. I like your style if writing. I can't help but be curious as to what will happen in the future in regards to Yuki, yes very curious indeed. Also I really hope that in the future we will se a jealous Draco. Nothing sexier than a jealous Draco. I love it. Well, I can't wait to see the next chapter. Hopefully it will come soon.
    Isa
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  • From ANON - miko on January 30, 2006
    This story is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love the way you have captured Draco's Character!! well done!!! Please Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Principessa on January 30, 2006
    Wow, i blink and get two new chapters!!! I should blink more often. Us usual your story ensnared me and i was glued to my screen untill the chapters were read. I love it! keep it up!

    *Blinks rapidy to see if her theory on new chapters works*
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on January 30, 2006
    You DO update fast! All the better, I say. I liked the traveling sequence. I spent a year in Japan and I really miss riding on the trains. There is nothing like it here is the US. *sigh* That dress sounds hot! Green, a coincidence? I think not. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - McChicklet on January 30, 2006
    Thanks for replying to my review not everyone does it. I still love the story even if there isn't any smut.
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on January 30, 2006
    wow he's very controlling of her, I have suspisions about those oaths she took. What Draco's real motive?
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  • From ANON - southern cross on January 30, 2006
    no need to worry i did not find this chap boring at all! i did however find myself wishing i were in italy. the last bit felt very much like that scene from pretty woman and i thought it was cute. poor hermione all this cold air must be killing her leg! and then i think back to when he asked about her leg...maybe he knows something she doesn't.

    cannot wait for more.

    ~Sara~
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  • From ANON - Darian on January 30, 2006
    This story ROCKS. I love the fact that you show Draco's frailty as well as Hermione's. Niether one of these chracters were ever perfect and to see what the years have done to both of them make them all the more human. BRAVO! Update soon as I am looking so forward to the journey.
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  • From ANON - Katz Potter on January 29, 2006
    Wow, Yuki's a bastard. I'm first in line to hit him upside the head! Now, I understand that Yuki's fears for Hermione are well-intended, but to let them go so far during the night... thank god Hermione escaped! I love how you compared Yuki's madness to Draco's madness. That was awesome. I think Yuki has some possession issues...

    I noticed some spelling and grammar errors, but for being unbeta'd, it was really good.

    Draco's an ass, but I love his assy-ness. He's just so... Draco, I guess.

    I enjoyed how you ended this chapter, the kind of foretelling of what Hermione will do in the future concerning the inn.

    All in all, very much up to par with your previous chapters; I applaud you and give you a plate of cookies.
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