Click Here!

Reviews for Out of the Silent Planet

By : moirasfate
  • From ANON - NAR on January 09, 2006
    Oh, of course. I'll find you somewhere. I'm entr0pique. When I do, you'll have no need to email me here anymore. As the the email thing there's a lovely thing called an address book. It'll save you lots of time. I'm sure you have a setting where you can group all of us into one huge folder, yes?
    Anyway back the reviewing.
    You have a lovely style. The magnititude of intensity of chapter 8 (don't think I was updated for that chapter) left me shaking, and yet your prose is all so easy, so simple, calm. There appears to be nothing special to it, but it is in fact lovely, lovely writing.
    The enchanted garden was lush with life and as Hermione stood upon a small flag stone path in the middle of the garden, she glanced up to see an overcast winter sky. Snow was falling like tiny angelic feathers from the clouds, but did not reach the warm ground of the garden
    That was a beautiful, beautiful picture you painted for us. You do have a way with expression. And as soon as you drew this picture for us it's ripped to shreds and the darkness of the previous chapter returns, catching us in the unawares.
    Great job in your portrayal of Draco. He's almost like Tom Riddle in many ways, but Draco and something else, something monsterous and sinister.
    The way Hermione reacted what not how I expected it, but I suppose it's very fitting. I like the way how she does not skip the pleasentries even when she's threatening him.
    Yuri completely caught me off guard. I can't wait until you develop more of a relationship and connection between them. There's obviously much more going on.
    The ending was WOW. So very creative and utterly brilliant. AMAZING.
    I forgot to mention in my previous review that I like how you approached Draco and Hermione. They're both crippled. It's very rare that you find fanon cripples in fanfic because writers like to hang on to the illusions that Draco and Hermione are perfect, gorgeous people- not one spot or freckle (unless they're a Weasley ;) ), highly well endowed and such all because they're fictional. They both fought a war. People die in wars, they get crippled and wounds and endure horrors. You made them very human in this aspect, easier to sympathize with. Though war is a touchy subject for many people, myself included, you don't glamorize it in anyway and for that I thank you.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 09, 2006
    Well that was an evil place to leave us... although you do know how to leave your readers thirsty for more. I thought there was more to Yuki than meets the eye. And as for Draco well, the snake spell was really a fine piece of work that he is certainly most deserving of. I can't wait for the next chapter. I too start school so I know how that can be. See you in the next, Hanna
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on January 08, 2006
    Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, love, but Auntie was busy with adventures at home. This is soooo exciting! (claps hands delightedly). Draco walking the edge of madness, falling off, and seemingly trying to take Hermione with him, and then Yuki (who sounds totally hot, by the way)... honey, Auntie loves! Oh, this is so...well, I'm completely enrapt, and hopelessly addicted, and will patiently wait for the next installment.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Christina on January 08, 2006
    This is one of the best Draco/Hermione stories I have read yet. You protray them wonderfully!!! I hope you do get to update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - baybevoyce on January 08, 2006
    Action-packed and as wonderful as usual! Yuki is even more of an interesting character than I thought before. He certainly lives up to the legend of his sire, hey?

    One question though--In Hermione's post-war explanation to bound-up Draco, she pronounced out "Malfoy Manor." If she was afraid before to actually call Draco "Malfoy," then shouldn't the phrase "Malfoy Manor" bring about the same effect?

    Report Review

  • From ANON - onduril on January 08, 2006
    Hi,
    I must say this is on of the best fics I`ve read so far.
    It is really interesting and the way you portrait Malfoy is nearly the exact same way I would do it.
    I hope you have enough time during spring term to write more, as I cannot await it.
    Greetings
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Know-it-all on January 08, 2006
    How exciting! I'm glad that Hermione got a chance to get back at Malfoy if only for a while. I also LOVE the direction you are taking with Yuki's character! He started out as this nice person and now we're really getting to see behind his mask. Two hot boys *swoon*. Very nice!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Katie on January 08, 2006
    ok so i think i just reviewed the first chapter and i meant to review this one. or the last one or whatever. i'm not really sure how the whole reviewing system works on here cause i never review. but this... this was worth a review. i honestly think i'm on love with this story. so please. just please update soon. please.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Katie on January 08, 2006
    ok so wow UPDATE NOW. i'm not kidding. i can not tell you how much i'm loving this story. please please please update soon. please.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Janus on January 08, 2006
    Left me hanging again! Damn! This story just keeps getting better and better. It seems there might be more to Yuki than we thought, especially at the end, with that lovely little sneer. Do I detect shades of his father coming through? Then there is Draco and his whacked out behavior. Just makes me love him even more. I'm sad that you won't be able to update as much but I understand since I go back January 17. Good luck with the new term and try not to go crazy just yet.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    yay what a great chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Heather on January 07, 2006
    I have to say this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read...The plot is excellent and it stays true to the characters...Good Job, keep up the good work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - dramioney on January 07, 2006
    The B*stard! *blushes*
    Once again you had me bitting my nails and edgying towards the screen, in hopes to not miss a thing.

    I can't believe he nearly raped her both Body & Mind, and lets not forget breaking her wand and beating her. Yet when Hermione asked about why he raped Pansy, his answer made me shudder, part of me was waiting for his dying devotion of wanting her (like all clich
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Know-it-all on January 07, 2006
    What a great chapter! I was so scared at what Draco would have done and with good reason it seems. But not too much harm done! I am so excited to see what will come next. keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From on January 06, 2006
    Please write more, I'm begging you!! This is a very unique story line. Too many fics are about appearences, not character. The combo of passion and hate are real emotions ppl go through. Thanks!! PS may your 'leading man' be safe..God speed.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!