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Reviews for Out of the Silent Planet

By : moirasfate
  • From moirasfate on February 07, 2006
    FROM THE AUTHOR
    I am wondering if anyone reads this besides me?
    Anyway, until AFF.net is up and running again, please head to my LJ at: http://ianthe-waiting.livejournal.com/
    And to address Sunday's review... I am a dumbass, aren't I? Okay, I'll have to decide what to do...since I killed Blaise in Chapter 8. *shoves head in oven*
    Since chapters 15 and 16 are unbeta'd and I cannot access them to give you the beta'd versions...the last chapter will be fixed a bit...in a way it works out for me, because Blaise is not the only character I have planned to show up.
    So, please head over to my LJ for updates until AFF.net is up and running again!
    Thanks to Sunday for pointing out my AWFUL error...it happens, so please don't hate me too much. Please?
    moirasfate.
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  • From ANON - Sunday on February 07, 2006
    Wait, something doesn't make sense.
    In chapter 8, at the flashback of Lucius's trial, he is charged with murdering Blaise Zabini. Yet the recent chapter mentions him alive and well.
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  • From ANON - SpartacusXP on February 07, 2006
    This fic really surprised me. I really just read it on a whim, assuming it was one of those dime-a-dozen fics that introduces all these japanese elements because the writer is some kind of hardcore otaku and this reminds them of anime. Usually the result is always just an awkward mess, but that's not the case here. You handled the culture changes very seriously, and I love the chemistry between Draco/Hermione. I think that is how it should be. My only critizism would be that sometimes the story drags and goes into more detail then needed, a minor complaint. Great story!
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  • From ANON - Principessa on February 06, 2006
    Another Masterpiece!!!

    I cant wait untill they get back to Britain... The story as per usual has me drawn in and showing signs of withdrawl till me next hit. Im sweating, shaking and all weepy... *Dances around with pom pom's and declare's herself as Moira's personal cheerleader*
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  • From ANON - Katie on February 06, 2006
    oh. my. god. please tell me there's gonna be some stuff with blaise. because my god i love draco/hermione/blaise. o god if it happens.. i think i'll die. wow.
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  • From ANON - rush22 on February 06, 2006
    another fantastic chapter!!! cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Diana on February 06, 2006
    Whew, now that was hot. :) I love this story more every time I read a new installment. I'm interested to see what happens at the party and where they'll go from here. Did he heal her leg or just make it easier to move and less painful? I've been wondering about that. Well, either way, keep up the great work.
    ~Diana
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  • From ANON - mid-summer nights on February 06, 2006
    Yay! Draco tenderness! in most of the fics that i have read draco is portrayed as Mr. Cool and "I'm in control of everything" (usually accompanied with his infamous smirk). i'm so glad that draco has an "emotional breakdown", it makes him seem much more human and even more desireable *giggles and blush*. and as far as the arm and the "little voices in his head", is it vulcan's spirit/soul that's infused with the arm? or is the arm just a representation of vulcan? (kind of like the sorting hat is a representation of the founders). Keep it up! i've been pretty busy lately (aren't we all?), but i'll check back when i have the chance to catch up on reading and reviewing.
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  • From ANON - Katz Potter on February 05, 2006
    OMG! I love you even more than I did! Eddie Izzard! "The Mormons ARE from Mars, Dad, we've had it checked out."

    Yay, Draco didn't rape her! Okay, the arm isn't THAT bad if it stopped him from raping her. Awwww, poor Draco... he's so conflicted inside!

    Lovely lovely smut, lots of smut. Yummyness. I like the whole interaction between them! Yesh. Blaise Zabini... ah, Blaise. I'm noticing some clich
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2006
    Oh wow. This fic is just getting better and better! Ic an't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Janus on February 05, 2006
    Holy Crap! I wait till the weekend to wait for the next chapter and I find THREE wonderfull, lovely chapters! It was a wonderful break from studying Calculus II and Physics. These chapters were wonderful, especially this last one. I'm diggin' on the whole possessed arm thing. Reminds me of the comic book Witchblade, except the arm can't do all of the cool things the Witchblade can. Crap! I'm rambling again, sorry. It will be interesting to see what direction you take Draco in with his new arm. Can't wait to see Blaise Zabini. I'm getting all excited. Ok, I'm going to go back to watching the Super Bowl!
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  • From ANON - nightslight on February 05, 2006
    You are on a roll here...last three chapters are great! I love the lemon, written with such raw feeling, very very well done. I love the small fight they had, good to see that Hermione still has it in her to beat up Draco. I wonder what is to happen next! I cant wait!!!
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  • From ANON - Lilly on February 05, 2006
    Wow..let me say I love you! I didn't expect an update so soon! The chapter is amazing and i am very courious of what will happen when they will be back in britain..and blaise and daphne together.. that reminds me of a very good fiction in the italian fandom called "original sin" that i love very much.
    Another little mistake .. it's braccio and not bracchio.. but I think is the same pronunciation thing... i noticed that in the Goblet of fire when harry says " Accio " or when Moody says " Crucio" it souded Assio and Crusio... In latin they are strong " C" and should sound like Accho and Crucho....
    Ok sorry for the babbling..and feel fre to correct my english
    chu chu
    Lilly
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  • From ANON - rox4787 on February 05, 2006
    love it cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on February 05, 2006
    Yet another great chapter in a great story.
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