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By : SilverDragonEyes
  • From Laivine on April 05, 2007
    Ok for starters this is not intended to be a flame. I really liked the sound of your story idea .. but you lost me in the first paragraph, simply because it was too disjointed due to the switching of tenses. One sentence You are telling the story in 3rd person, the next its first person. This ruins the flow of the text. Perhaps if you did some editing, or got someone to do this for you then you could improve on this. I'm sorry if this sounded mean .. but I am all for contructive criticism .. I believe it is how we grow and learn. I hope you can see what I am trying to say.
    -Laivine
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 10, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    if you dont update this story i wil have to kill u this is fantastic and i need to know what happens so u beta upstae asap or i will bee soooo upset plz upsdate sson plz this is fantastic
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  • From ANON - bellakuuipo on January 12, 2006
    Great start I hope you update soon I so want to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Jo on January 06, 2006
    why have you only posted one chapter? *whining* Just my bad luck. Never thougt the thought of a threesome with blaise could be so good. I want mooooore!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2006
    please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - mona on December 27, 2005
    ooooo update sooon!
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on December 27, 2005
    no don't stop there.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    i like it so far!
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  • From ANON - AngelEyez on December 27, 2005
    it's a good start but you need to get a beta. there are way too many errors. update soon.
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  • From avari20 on December 26, 2005
    Good start. I'd like to read more!
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