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Reviews for Love Can Be a Battle or a War

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - JW on December 28, 2005
    Ch 5-7 - good work, Tonks! How funny, that everyone in the house notices something happening with Severus and Hermione - maybe they'll start a betting pool. So Hermione is going to start playing games with the Slytherin.... heh-heh! Can't wait to see the fireworks!
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 28, 2005
    I love this Tonks/Kingsley partnership.

    This whole fic is very amusing and entertaining, I think I am repeating myself.

    The bit with the golem was extremely funny and now that Hermione knows what the game is, I can't wait for her to back Severus into a corner.

    I hope she takes over the lab just to annoy him. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on December 28, 2005
    wow ... please more ...

    angel
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  • From slygriff21 on December 28, 2005
    Wow! This is starting to heat up and quickly! I can't wait to see what happens at the mixer! Please update again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Sea on December 28, 2005
    "For Severus, it was like Christmas every day." - ROFL, like a cat with a mouse. It's good to see Snape having fun!
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  • From ANON - pokerfan on December 28, 2005
    "you should be getting your F elixir at least twice a week".....LOL I love it....

    Can't wait for the lemons...hopefully in the ROR with some golems too??


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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on December 28, 2005
    Yay! Hermione's strapping on her armor and is going to face him - MUCH better than just zooming away whenever he pops up... but I DO hope that she'll egt one up on him so maybe he will be the one blushing (at least once) Maybe some R.O.R. lemonade? I'm just sayin'...
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on December 28, 2005
    Another story already!!! You kick ass.
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  • From ANON - happilyjaded on December 28, 2005
    While I do not claim to be an expert, may I make a suggestion or two? When I read the exchanges between Hermione and Severus in "Maid in the Devil's Manor" I died laughing at the blatant innuendo. When they had that dinner of "sensuous delights?" Holy shite! It was too in your face - a 13 year old would have been blushing. Try to be subtler. For example, rather than have her suck on a banana, maybe she could lick her lips while they are arguing, or she could catch his eyes on her from across the room and shiver. My other suggestion was to not have him start pursuing her - instead, have Snape push and push as he is doing in the story, only to have Hermione's resolve break during a shouting match and push back - i.e. he provokes fight, she wants to flee, he pushes, she finally pushes back, heat develops, characters feel heat, in heat of moment passion erupts into kissing (or whatever.) I think if he planned to seduce her it wouldn't fit with what you have already started. But hell, you've probably written chapter 20 so far, so thanks for taking the time to read my thoughts, from one fanfiction writer to another. I wish I had your drive, or a grandmother as cool as you. I can't even say "sex" in the same house as my Gran, she'll hear me and beat my ass. ~Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 28, 2005
    Ch 6 - I think Hermione should continue to use the ROR but change the golem. Hmm, Severus in full staulking mode. Yummy.
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  • From ANON - a_reader on December 28, 2005
    Back from the holidays and astonished at your output! (Though probably shouldn't be, lol) So, I feel incredibly greedy for wanting to shout MORE, MORE PLEASE!



    I do like that one trait remains constant to your Hermiones and Snapes, no matter how it is manifested, and that is their stubborness. It makes for such a great dynamic, no matter what they are strugging over/against.
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  • From Applekissis on December 28, 2005
    I am so glad u added another chappy....This story is so good!!!!!
    I cant wait til they both give in to desire!!!lol....should be very intresting
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  • From ANON - Denise on December 28, 2005
    chp 6: nice. i like the twist. i think i can also see the glint of yellow lemons in the distance! update soon!
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on December 28, 2005
    Great story. I love the idea of the missplaced aggression.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 28, 2005
    Ch RoR - Oh boy that was a shocker!! and not just for me. Carry on Ms Figg, you got me.
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