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Reviews for Love Can Be a Battle or a War

By : Ms_Figg
  • From slygriff21 on December 28, 2005
    OMG! LMAO! That was so mean of Hermione to send Sybil after Severus like that! I also loved the part where Hermione chopped off the end of the carrot. This story is really getting good so far! Update again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - jennyjo on December 28, 2005
    I love you stories. Keep it up and thanks for the frequent updates.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 28, 2005
    Ch 8 - Ah twisted the man might be but it would sure be interesting to make a salad with him. Whew! I think the lettuce is wilting.
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on December 28, 2005
    this reminds me of a quote..."sex, lies, and salad forks." keep up the exxxcellent work!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on December 28, 2005
    Denise: Betas are great. I don't use one because they would slow me down first off. My chapters aren't pre-written. I post them as I write them. And I don't like to wait around. Not everyone has the time I do. Editing is as painstaking as writing if you do it well. Secondly, I use fragments quite a bit as well as one-word sentences that would never make it past them. lol. I have a tendency to write like I think and speak, and sorry to say that isn't always in proper structure or english. I think I do a reasonable job of editing as I write, and have done some paid editing from time to time. Of course there are going to be mistakes. Even published novels often have one or two errors in them. I don't let them bother me too much, and correct them when I see them most of the time and have no problem correcting them if they are pointed out to me. As long as the mistakes I make don't disrupt the flow of the story, then I think I'm doing okay. And I'm sure my readers don't mind telling me when I've made glaring errors. I appreciate it when they do.
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 28, 2005
    wonderful banter is making me laugh
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  • From ANON - LemonLover on December 28, 2005
    Oh Ms. Figg, you are a trip...
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  • From ANON - justnothingness on December 28, 2005
    masterpiece
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  • From ANON - Denise on December 28, 2005
    chp 8: Yes, definatley twisted. but a very sexy twisted. Seduction while making a salad is definatley original, it is also probably the only thing my husband has never tried....lol. well, let us just hope that the carrot incident will not turn severus off!

    **Btw, after reading some of the reviews, I was sondering what YOUR opinion about a beta was...**

    Please Update Soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - JW on December 28, 2005
    Ch 8 - ooh, lovely tomato scene! Too bad he didn't do anything with the cucumber. I hope he doesn't lose his nerve over her "carrot" treatment. Nice for Tonks and Kingsley to be so amused!
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  • From ANON - Agatha on December 28, 2005
    I'd like to just once read something in which Severus gets the upper hand on Hermione and renders her speechless. How about turning the tables from every fic and having him have her always side stepping. She's smart, but naive. I'd like to think he knows a bit more than her.
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  • From ANON - Inspire on December 28, 2005
    Who knew that salad could be so sexy?
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  • From ANON - angel on December 28, 2005
    ~lol~ that was great i love it please please more ....

    angel
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  • From ANON - snapesflower on December 28, 2005
    Figgy, you are sumpthin' else!!!!!!!!!!! pmsl!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 28, 2005
    well thats one way to get snape to shut up with his comments. Oh to damn funny lol
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