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Reviews for Pain (Rewritten)

By : ForcekillMiki

From ANON - Morbid_Incubus on July 24, 2006
This has great potential but was very hard to follow. A lot of commas, many unneeded, jumps around a bit, missing words and sentences that make little sense. May I reccommend getting a beta?

-Mew
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From ANON - andie on January 01, 2006
Good! Update soon, please please
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From ANON - brittany on December 30, 2005
please please please update soon
this story so far is amazing
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From ANON - JJ on December 29, 2005
Boy, things just keep getting worse and worse for the "bloody boy who lived!" In this case, it seems all of his name applys. What else will Poppy tell us???
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From ANON - momoko on December 29, 2005
good chapters, bye
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From Sitt on December 29, 2005
no no no a cliffy... please update soon
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From Sitt on December 29, 2005
I dont remember if I post last time or not but that was the hardest chapter I have gone through... you have me in tears :'(... it's well written but so so sad.
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From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2005
There's so much promise in this fic- please hurry with thje next chapter!
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From ANON - Sev-Harrylover on December 27, 2005
this is a ggod story, you should really continue it. I loved it. I love how you had Severus run to save Harry.

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From ANON - Cindy on December 27, 2005
I hope you are able to continue with more chapters soon. Great so far.
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From ANON - Hambares on December 27, 2005
Nice! more please!
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From ANON - En4cerMax on December 27, 2005
I do hope that you continue this. I like it so far. :)
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