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Reviews for Off Limits

By : avari20
  • From ANON - NAR on January 01, 2006
    Draco, Blaise and Hermione threesome AND Draco/Blaise a powerplay?! I'm all aflutter! I was squeeing for a whole ten seconds out loud when I saw the description. There's not enough of it, and so, I am eternally grateful to you for writing this.
    In addition to that, it's really well done. Believable and in character, descriptive, well developed and damned hot. Quality smut. Perfect and intense, but never overshadowing the plot.
    WONDERFUL job.
    Email me when you update?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2006
    that is HOT, please update.
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  • From ANON - Avari20 on December 31, 2005
    Actually, Pare, she is my beta. She, Maevenly, and IzzyBell. IzzyBell is the bet at grammatics, Daniel spots the inconsistentsies and evaluates the emotional plausibility, and Maevenly eggs me on. And a special thanks to Ada as well!
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  • From ANON - Pare on December 31, 2005
    Daniel you might as well ask Avari if he/she could be her beta. Anyways, good job with the story so far the pacing is good and you should keep up with this story.
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  • From ANON - Avari20 on December 31, 2005
    Because somebody else touched her.
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  • From ANON - Daniel on December 31, 2005
    This is much better and you know it!

    Just one question "And then I
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  • From RiddlesNovice on December 31, 2005
    I love the idea of Draco using the Fake Hermione as practise for Blaise. Excellent chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on December 30, 2005
    Wow! That was way better. Way better! I liked the insight into Draco's mind. I gives you more of his feelings which makes him more inviting.
    I know I said I was excited about you continuing because it was hot before. But seeing how determined Draco is as well as Blaise about possessing her, it can only get better from here.
    PEACE
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    cant wait for chapter 3
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  • From ANON - Jo on December 30, 2005
    I was never really into BZ/DM, but this story changed my mind. I can't wait to see how Draco gets Hermione. Also I really like your writing style, it's very engaging and rushed (but in a good way!).
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  • From ANON - Legomygrego19 on December 30, 2005
    Yay!!!! Even better then the last time!!!! Keep going!!!!!!!! I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - LaLa on December 30, 2005
    Shit! Now this is some hot stuff. Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    I'm not usually into the threesome or slash, in fact I've never read any. but I have to admit this was is great, I really like it, so please keep writting, I can't wait to see what happenes.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on December 30, 2005
    Think they'd noticed if I became the doll instead? LOL Keep those chapter coming. (Pun intended).
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  • From moreta on December 30, 2005
    how intense..you've got to update soon
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