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By : avari20
  • From ANON - Jadziadaxx on January 03, 2006
    Does Drco date girls at all in school or has it always Blaise? Do the students know they are lovers?
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  • From ANON - NAR on January 03, 2006
    Good chapter. Has a slightly passive feel to it. The ending is hanging a little from the rest of it, and is disconnected- it doesn't feel right with the rest of the chapter. Blaise is much more developed in this chapter. He's very much a lover above all else, not the silent, observer we see in canon, but you've made him your own. Draco is still very much a strategist, though I think Blaise is smart enough to unravel his plans himself. Though not bad at all, could be improved upon slightly. We get a clear sense of how accepting Hermione is and how easily she is to be tricked. I think we needed a little more banter to top it off between her and the boys, some teasing, make them sweat a little.
    Am I sensing an already present relationship with Hermione, Ron and Harry? Draco and Blaise's hearts will be broken if there is one.
    Good job.
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  • From ANON - LaLa on January 03, 2006
    AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! How could you just leave us at that. You are sooooooooo EVIL!!! Please update soon!
    Ps. Since you are such an awsome writer, how about writing a Draco!Veela/Hermione!Mate when you have a chance???
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  • From ANON - whatever on January 03, 2006
    its like everytime u write a chapter you amaze me it seems so real i love it update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2006
    hey this is pretty good its been awhile since ive read a harry potter fic, wouldn't it be funny if hermione knew their plans all along lol
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  • From ANON - moreta on January 03, 2006
    another good chapter...update soon

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2006
    yay an update! woo hoo i like chapter 3 and chapter 4 sounds like its gonna be better.
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  • From ANON - slythrinpeincess on January 03, 2006
    luv it please update soon
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  • From ANON - Avanell on January 03, 2006
    Oh, I cannot WAIT for what happens next! Please post it soon! I'm dying here! I love trio relationships without the petty jealousy. and Draco and Blaise on the prowl...HOT! LOVE IT!
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  • From TCardan on January 03, 2006
    I'm really enjoying your story! The Slytherin princes *sigh* I'm anticipating the fun to come!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on January 03, 2006
    Oh no, the dreaded cliffy. Please don't take too long to post. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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  • From ANON - Chavela on January 03, 2006
    The scene between the ywo boys was very sweet.
    I loooove that this is moving along more into thier plan. It's exciting. I hope the next chapter is also another progressive one leading to everything. This one had them closer to her so that is just FREAKING awesome! I can't wait for the next one. Hopefully it is soon as well.
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  • From ANON - mona on January 03, 2006
    uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppddddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ihate cliff hangers they are so evil, but at least it's a good one :)
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  • From ANON - briana on January 03, 2006
    I adore this fic. Im excited to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - 2bfoundwantin on January 03, 2006
    Yay! Another fine chapter. I am glad this wasn't only about b/d physical relationship, i was getting entirly impatient for some Hermione interaction. This is an interesting concept you have proposed, on how they will get Hermione, it isn't one ive seen before, and i am looking forward to seeing where you go with it!!
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