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Reviews for Why do you love me

By : estelle
  • From ProfSnape101 on January 04, 2010
    please continue!!!!! not enough of these types around!!!
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  • From reva on May 19, 2007
    great story idea. but where is the rest of it? lol.
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  • From ANON - angel on July 08, 2006
    wow i just found this story ang i love it .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - johnel on June 20, 2006
    This is a wonderful story. this is the 1st of it kind I have ever came across
    Please continue to write. I and the rest of your readers will be wating.
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  • From ANON - Anonomous on February 11, 2006
    Meh, another thing! I like the incorperation of the Tattoo and nipple rings, though if you do go into the explanation of how she got them or if other characters go to get one done i would really appreciate it if you put atleast a small amount of stress on going to a PROFESSIONAL shop! Many teens read these stories and don't know the dangers of unprofessional tattoos, proper sanitation and the like. I noticed in one of your A/N you mentioned doing a tattoo for someone and i'm not meaning to offend you (if you are indeed someone who tattoos in their home) and also trying to not lecture but its something i feel strongly about after working in a tattoo/piercing studio. Please just don't let Harry and Hermionie decide to make some homemade machines and go nuts on everyone at a party you know.....meh......yeah...i'm lecturing aren't i?
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  • From ANON - Anonomous on February 11, 2006
    Intresting idea, now if you can pull it off without completly murdering the SS they have known for 6 years i will be impressed. If you can make it believable..
    I suggest making the chapters longer if you wish to continue this one..such short chapters rarely have enough plot in them to keep you wanting more!
    Please continue this, this is a direction i have not seen a HP fanfic not go yet. I can't wait to see what challenges there will be now with V gone and everyone thinking thier problems are over. Stay creative with this one!!!
    Also, granted i know i'm being hypocritcal considering this post in itself is grammatical murder, please get someone to beta you to help you change around things that are worded strangly and help with spelling and whatnot.
    I know i can't spell or write well :P thats why i simply read fanfic instead of write it!! Its just destracting from the story, makes it not flow..

    Now i guess thats the end of my drabble review...please continue with this you have a lot of potential!!
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  • From ANON - rox4787 on January 24, 2006
    love it cant wait to read more so please please update soon thanks
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  • From ANON - Crystal on January 11, 2006
    Hey i am new to this site and wanted to tell it is a good story. Keep it up and update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2006
    Interesting ideas, just have to work on your grammar. Examples

    "He thinks they're his" instead of "He thinks their his".

    Capitals letters in the title.

    "Lily" instead of "Lilly".


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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on December 30, 2005
    Interesting!! I would like to see where this goes!!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on December 30, 2005
    I am terribly excited to read more, but please try to elongate your chapters! This is such a fun idea that you should just draw it out! Good job so far, more more more!
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  • From ANON - Dragon-elf on December 29, 2005
    I like the story line so far, keep it going you're doing great!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Crazywolf on December 29, 2005
    I really like your story it's different from the other stories out there.
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  • From ANON - Mswigglesworth on December 29, 2005
    Okay, do us all a favor and post something more substantial. People are willing to wait for longer chapters.
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  • From ANON - Erin on December 29, 2005
    just a few of the errors

    ch 1:

    "Lilly please you can
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