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Reviews for A New Headmaster

By : Sitt
  • From HeartStar on January 14, 2010
    I would love to see more of this story too please
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  • From ANON - seto silk on January 24, 2006
    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on January 21, 2006
    Lovely thus far. Really, it is!

    Only thing is, I didn't think that one needed deffense against Darts, maybe minor if you're going with the older darts that are made out of metal. I fell over laughing at reading that. Also, now, I'm not very knowledgable in human anatomy, but I'm pretty sure that we don't have any part of our bodies named "nibbles". Perhaps nipples, but not nibbles. (Unless you're one of those people with the kink to name body parts.) Just some things I thought I should point out.

    Please do continue with this story.
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 29, 2005
    Some minor grammar/spelling errors, but they don't effect the gist of your story. So Severus and Harry are already a couple and things are going down hill fast! Sounds like fun! Welcome to Adult Fan Fiction. Thanks for writing and sharing your stories.
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  • From ANON - .... on December 28, 2005
    yay! i hope its a boy! and if it has to be a girl name her raven!
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  • From ANON - lenea on December 28, 2005
    This looks very promising. I like very much the pregnant Severus stories!
    I hope you will update soon.
    Lenea
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