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Reviews for Secret of the Male Veela

By : Mrriddler
  • From ANON - firelordeg on January 30, 2006
    holy fuck that was fantastic wow wat a great chapter please keep up the fantastic work and update agin a.s.a.p.
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  • From ANON - Zevrillion on January 30, 2006
    liked the new chapter.
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  • From ANON - jw on January 30, 2006
    great update i hope you add more soon it felt likke forever to get this one put it was worth it
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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on January 30, 2006
    Great chapter! Very sexy!!!! Update soon
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  • From ANON - Mike on January 30, 2006
    I love this story... update quickly!
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  • From ANON - SamStone on January 30, 2006
    I liked it and a nice way to work out humor and fun.
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on January 29, 2006
    Well a fantastic lemon. At one point you mentioned your lemons would never be as good as Big D on a diet's lemons (or something like that) but I must say at your rate of improvement you'll be just as good or better in no time at all! :) Looking forward to the next update with as much aticipation as possible!
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  • From on January 29, 2006
    Great chapter, and you hardly need to worry about your lemon-writing. When you said you found them hard to write, I sure as hell wasn't expecting a 5000-word scene...! You're better at it than most of the people on this site -- keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2006
    good chapter update soon.
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  • From GuardianOfLight on January 29, 2006
    I'm afraid I can't give you a review as long as last time without repeating myself but I''ll have to do that to a certain extent.

    Yet again you got the balance of sex and plot just right, with great descriptions all the way through.

    More sky punching moments in Dumbledore's office (you really don't like him do you) and plenty more suspence.

    Just a couple of things to comment badly on.

    1. Are Dumbledore, Hermione and Ron going to be kicked at and down graded in every single chapter, they are suposed to be the good guys you know.

    2. This one is a request, can you place the French translations next to the actually French, say in square brackets [] as otherwise you have to scroll to the bottom of the screen everytime Fleur speaks.

    Those were the only things, excellent work yet again and please right faster, these stories are the only thing that make my life bearable

    Adam
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  • From ANON - B1323 on January 29, 2006
    I want...
    MOAAAAAAAAAAAR!
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  • From ANON - Silver Dragon on January 29, 2006
    I like this story but am woundering if in the future is harry going to have kids with his harem or not I hope he does as I belive that is what harry wants most in life a family.
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  • From ANON - scott on January 29, 2006
    very well done, hard to think of words to describe this story. hope you continue to put in lemon moments in the future. thanks for a very wonderfull read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2006
    Amazing story. That last chapter was a bit too long but so awesome. The lemon and sex was amazing, probably the best I have seen so far. Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - aphro on January 29, 2006
    i like it
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