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Reviews for Secret of the Male Veela

By : Mrriddler
  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on January 13, 2006
    Another good chapter and I like how harry is so suave in everything he does. its cool that he can do all of that so perfectly and really fun to read about it all coming together :) im glad narcissa and tonks are still in the running. they would be my favs, im also glad that your playing with the idea of a magical creature (Ex: werewolf, vamp elf) very cool characters and lemons those can make!
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  • From ANON - # on January 13, 2006
    vampire,Drow seem interesting
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  • From ANON - Mrriddler on January 13, 2006
    Silverdagger - Good, I'm glad some people are getting the point that Fleur and now Harry aren't entirely human. BDSM is part of their nature. As for:

    "Harry should probably not go that far (ie: thinking actual rape/enslavement is a good and wonderous thing to inflict on people)"

    You are absolutely correct. Harry won't nearly go that far. His progression into 'darkness' will be quite tame (two steps forward and a step back in hesitation kind of thing) and hopefully realistic. He won't drop into doing/enjoying rape/enslave type of thing. Though, I'll say that there are other means of breaking a human being.
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  • From ANON - Silverdagger on January 13, 2006
    Very interesting, and given his species has changed, his mindset changing is logical enough...afterall, Fleur was -raping- him, to be specific, raping and enslaving him, there in the Veela segment of the Astral Plane, and thought nothing wrong.

    Harry should probably not go that far (ie: thinking actual rape/enslavement is a good and wonderous thing to inflict on people) but being more inclined towards such things fits his new species, especially if used in moderation.

    As for Harem...hmm...I would put a vote in for a Slytherin girl, possibly Daphne but one of the others would do (although either non-evil or willing to change is a must)...also, I would nominate Ginny just on general "liked the couple" principals.

    As for the "list": +1 Tonks, +1 P/P Twins, -1 Narcissa.
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  • From ANON - Anony on January 13, 2006
    +1 for susan, patils, tonks. -1 for Narcissa
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  • From ANON - Lightning on January 13, 2006
    sweet story. update, update, update!!!
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  • From ANON - anonymous lit student on January 13, 2006
    I love the list of potentials for Harry's future harem. I submit one vote for each applicant. The possibility of Harry having a "menage a twin" with the Patils always amuses me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    Great story. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - FREDDIE on January 13, 2006
    Definately Mrs./Miss Malfoy/Black and Tonks.

    Also does harry win all the stuff from the Death Eaters that he killed. Since it was a dual, abit not a fair one but still a dual.

    Also when is harry going to do some rituals and could he not go to the Banks and ask for emiptation/legal adult since no magical guardians possible.
    ie parents dead. Sirius wanted criminals and Auntie not possible candiate.

    Also have harry create a mark, abit a invisible one. ie modify the one tom uses, since he wants to show the world his army, while harry wants to keep his a secret thus making him different from the other Male Veelas, thus having a better chance of winning since they can be anyone. Also mind talk possible via marks thus spy and ministry personals not found out.

    Also did Lucy ie Mr Malfoy die that night and HAVE SKEETER apart of his harem or army.

    Have harry create a deaging potion with possible balisks vemon as key componant since hard to get not potion masters have made it. also use muggle DNA as key principle when brewing it. ALso have this potion a secret.

    NICE

    FREDDIE
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  • From ANON - ex_seal_66 on January 13, 2006
    Another awesome chapter!
    My votes for all the candidates except Narcissa.
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - korrd on January 13, 2006
    Su Li
    Tracy Davis
    Blaise (fem)
    Tonks
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    Really liked it. Better way of handlig Veela than I have seen. So lets see where this goes
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  • From ANON - domo on January 11, 2006
    Gabrielle +1
    Parvati
    Padma
    Lavender
    Susan
    Cho
    Su Li
    Tracy Davis
    Blaise (fem)
    Pansy +1
    Tonks +1
    Narcissa +1
    Bellatrix add

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  • From ANON - Mrriddler on January 11, 2006
    Jarno - True, genetics is inheriently about the probablity of most likely outcome, but specific gene dominance is very different from a theory of superdominance or eugenics, which when taken to extreme equates to being a specific means of breeding a superior race of people.

    Glad to know you like it so far. I know it's pretty light for an NC-17 but this isn't a smut and I had a lot of plot stuff I needed to slug through.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006
    Parvati +1
    Padma +1
    Lavender +1
    Su Li +1
    Blaise (fem) +1
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