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Reviews for Secret of the Male Veela

By : Mrriddler
  • From ANON - Jarno on January 11, 2006
    Nice story, really nice. I do believe gene dominance exist. Say a blue eyed and a brown eyed get a child then that child will have a much bigger chance at having brown eyes because that is dominant.
    As to other girls well deffinetly add in parvati and padma =>twins.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006
    Excellent story. Quite technical ;)

    Next Harem -Gabrielle
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  • From ANON - llama on January 10, 2006
    Great stuff. Good grasp of the English language (there are a few mistakes, just like everyone makes) but you need a beta. (I didn't see any beta-crediting, so I'm assuming you don't have one) We all do, and it shouldn't be too hard to get one. :p
    Anywho, this is a change of pace from most veela stories. I like that, it's refreshing. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on January 10, 2006
    Another fantastic chapter moving along your story and the farther it goes the more i enjoy it! um i vote for Lavender and Narcissa and Tonks and it would be cool if you could get a vampire girl into the mix :)
    looking forward to next update =:)
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  • From ANON - Ari on January 10, 2006
    Nice work. Hmm, keep it simple. Three girls. One for Hogwarts, one for Dursley's, and Fleur.
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  • From ANON - Alex on January 10, 2006
    Gabrielle (age modified
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  • From ANON - killerlord on January 10, 2006
    i like to have
    Narcissa
    tonk
    susan bones
    katie bell
    blaise fem
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  • From ANON - nickel on January 10, 2006
    Okay, as I think I've already confessed of my undying love for this fic... (>0^/ Cho -1, Blaise +1, Daphne +++++1!!! (I really like the way she's turning out in this fic!).
    BTW, is this fic going to be an all M/F fic? If not, I'd like to see at least one of the Slytherin guys (someone especially nasty) get fooled around a little. But that's just a suggestion. So,

    Please! Update! Soon! >u/
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  • From Mrriddler on January 10, 2006
    ok just in case anyone reads:

    ShadowandFlamePanther - Miswrote the intro. Meant Au from the 4th canon book, but I changed it to "AU from 4th book GoF" just so there's no confusion.

    Aria-chan - ahm...damn the idea's too good. I can already see the plot bunnies dancing around me...away, away!!!
    I can only think about them. Tonks and Black sisters were too cliche for me.
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  • From ANON - bill on January 09, 2006
    Gabrielle +1
    Parvati -1
    Padma -1
    Lavender +1
    Susan -1
    Cho +1
    Su Li -1
    Tracy Davis -1
    Blaise (fem) -1
    Pansy +1
    Tonks +1
    Narcissa +1

    Those are my choices for the harem. Keep writing. Ths story is doing good but you could add a bit more discripitions of sex scenes.
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  • From SFPANTHER on January 09, 2006
    AU from 4th Book canon....... I have a few questions...


    How can this story be AU and In Canon from the same time? I'm confussed.

    For one Harry was not nor will ever be a Veela therefore he can not be in canon. It doesn't matter if you do put it in AU it doesn't change the fact that he is not a veela and therefore not in Canon.

    As far as I know Canon means... You take the character directly from the book or movie ect ect.. and do not change a thing about them.

    In this story Harry is Veela which is not canon.. You may think he is just because he is in a AU but he is not Canon would mean that Harry is the same as he is in the book or movie with no added magical abilities. Please do not state this story is canon because clearly it is not. This is not a flame just a question.

    Please explain to me how you come up with that he is still in canon even though it is AU? Enquiring minds wish to know.
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  • From ANON - Aria-Chan on January 09, 2006
    great story :)

    about the girls...

    i was thinking about adding tonks to harry's harem when he is at the dursleys satisfying his lust on muggle girls. tonks is guarding him and becomes more and more curious on why the girls harry has been with always come back for more and scream so loud (and maybe a little hero-worship?) so she decides to metamorph herself into an 'innocent' 'muggle' girl and lets herself be seduced by harry, thus bounding her to him.

    that said...

    what do you think about bellatrix and narcissa? i am very good at coming up with believable plots to add girls to his harem..... *wicked smirk*

    thank you very much for the story and please update soon :)

    xxxx Aria-Chan
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on January 09, 2006
    i ould love to see bellatriz and tonks especially i love those pairings!
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  • From ANON - jw on January 09, 2006
    daphne ands tonks are both great chooses for harrys group the story going great andf i hope to read more soon
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  • From ANON - anonymous on January 09, 2006
    Very nice! Who would I like to see involved? Aside from Susan Bones, I'd figure Harry would
    be prowling for Parvati and Padma Patil. Isn't it every young man's fantasy to bed twins?
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