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Reviews for Secret of the Male Veela

By : Mrriddler
  • From wapitibull on May 28, 2011
    I really like this story. Is it going to have any updates in the near future?
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  • From marinepotterfan on July 04, 2010
    I enjoyed reading your story Im sorry to see that you have stopped writing, what a pity!

    MPF
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  • From arkenstone007 on November 23, 2009
    Dumbledore made the restroom comment at the Christmas Yule Ball that year not in Harry's first year.
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  • From garsdal on November 01, 2009
    O* (a fan made OWL score that means O and a half.)

    your veela interaction is simply marvolus, he should have sat himself as their demigod by now, but he cannot trust them not (quite litteraly) backstab him again. killing him or enslaveing his very soul.
    and that they trusted their experiance of the last male veela to guide the new, was nuts, but understandable. the power that comes with being male veela can make most mad, and harry has trouble controlling himself from time to time should be proof of that. he almost raped the princess as an act of vengance as his preessor would.
    and its going to be so amusing to see them trying to make up this whole mess of fear, anger, loyalties and insatable lust.
    looking forward to an update:D
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  • From Hedwigseyes on April 04, 2009
    So far I am enjoying the story and can't wait to finish it. I love the writing style and i most certainly look up and past or future stories you have written.
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  • From Patient131071 on May 07, 2008
    spent the last couple of days reading your fic in between revision for exams. I feel obliged to praise your work for its readability ( and hex you heavily as a result of this, since i really ought to have been trying to sleep/revise instead of reading it the majority of the time.
    Particular praise goes to the first major threesome between HP, Fleur and Regine, which is the first threesome scene I've read and actually liked. As a whole the Smut content has been good, as has the plot, and your action scenes are better than alot of published authors. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2007
    oh... my... god! this is the best story ive ever read all i can say is oh... my... god!
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  • From ANON - PisOgPapir on December 03, 2006
    Your writing is beautiful, i like the way you use different languages, though it would be a bit easier to see through if you put the translations at top.
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  • From ANON - some_guy on October 07, 2006
    AWESOME! This story has me drooling in anticipation. Everything has been to my liking so far; this is a really great idea and story.
    It's just too bad Harry didn't decide to bond the princess anyway. :)
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  • From ANON - BZLF on September 16, 2006
    Exceeds Expectations!

    This is a truly amazing story, and I am very glad to see updates to it since last I read it. Congratulations on creating such a unique and well writen plot. I hope you update again soon.
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  • From ANON - flynnie on August 10, 2006
    this is an inredible story! i usually hate stories where harry potter is the main charecter but this one is really great! i hope you are almost ready to post another chapter cause i'm pretty ready to read and review a new one!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2006
    good story. can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - thx on June 19, 2006
    Good story.
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  • From ANON - Shakti on March 08, 2006
    Excellent! It's beyond anything in Mills & Boon ;)
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  • From ANON - Shakti on February 10, 2006

    Perfectly done! Your style of writing is very professional. I just have a teensy little request... PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SLASH IN THIS STORY!! I absolutely love how you've made Harry a dominating Alpha male - it would be a huge turn-on to see him dominate another fine male specimen ;) All the slash stories on the net have a lot of fem and fluff without much machismo... your story however shows a very masculine Harry. It would be fantastic to see Stud Veela Harry shag a bloke! I realize that you're writing Het, but could you please work the plot such that Harry takes male lovers too? Please, please do and I promise I'll tell all my friends about your fic!! Please-o-please??!!
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