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Reviews for Wandering

By : WanderingLights
  • From ANON - Lynda on January 11, 2006
    Very well written scene. Not over done and with just enough visuals to get the scene in our minds without unneccessary detail. I really enjoy the comfort stories (brings out the Florence Nightengale in me I guess). I like the way you have given us bits of what is happening outside of Harmonie finding Severus (the Order broken, Harmione not sure if Harry is alive or not, ect). It gives a subtle bleak picture of events so far and really peaks my interest to read on.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006
    love tradgick sevvie
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 11, 2006
    Awwww, that was sooo sad.
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  • From ANON - kim on January 11, 2006
    oooooow. i was in teers as she passed away
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  • From ANON - Moyra on January 11, 2006
    I read this in one rush this afternoon. Normally I avoid such dark fics, but you had me hooked on. All the turmoil they went through, all the pain, the hopes, the fears, the love - wonderful written, immensely touching. And the end is very befitting for this fic. And if you write another one, perhaps less sad, as you mentioned, please email me, I would very like to read something from you again! Cheers, Moyra.
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  • From ANON - misswigglesworth on January 11, 2006
    This was a very nice story, but if you are in the mood, I wouldn't mind a alternative ending. Maybe a less angsty one?
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  • From Myrkrida on January 11, 2006
    i thought it was very well done for a first. i cried just a bit at the end and everything. wonderful.
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  • From ANON - MissMaryRae on January 11, 2006
    I just read this story, and I enjoyed it very much. I found it touching, and I think that the ending was more appropriate than "and then they lived together forever and had six kids" type, considering the situations.

    The only criticism I have is that the transitions are a bit jerky; twice, coming from one chapter to another I was confused until I was about halfway in. But aside from that, I thought it was a quite well-done story. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - mekareami on January 10, 2006
    Wow! I can't believe that was your first attempt at a lemon. Good job :)

    I am enjoying your story. Well written
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  • From ANON - rush22 on January 10, 2006
    i think that you wrote a very beautiful piece of work and i hope that you continue to do so! good luck!
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  • From ANON - Sea on January 10, 2006
    A very well written story. Sad ending true, but you gave the readers the knowledge that they would be together again. Look forward to more of your writing.
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  • From Applekissis on January 10, 2006
    OMG*sniff*that was so*sniff* sad yet*sniff*beautuful..*sniff* so tragic*wails*..I*sniff* loved it*snorts loud*
    *smiles*
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  • From ANON - Rose Evans on January 10, 2006
    Thank you so much for the battle chapter. I hope you update soon ? But I would hope hermonie get's her sight & hearing back. Keep up the great work. Rose
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on January 10, 2006
    Uh...did we skip a chapter or something? I'm a bit confused here.

    Red

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  • From ANON - Barbara on January 10, 2006
    Thanks for the udpate, worth the wait.
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