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Reviews for Wandering

By : WanderingLights
  • From ANON - Severessa on January 05, 2006
    This is an incredible story so far. I hope that you get plenty of reviews, you deserve it!
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  • From ANON - abatises on January 05, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this story -- the premise, the characterization, and the gentle way in which Hermione and Snape interact -- it rings true of victims of abuse, and it also underlines the strength of their characters in being able to not only survive their ordeals, but also to still want to reach for the warmth of another, to be able to replace fear with solace. The scene of them making love is very well written and truly enjoyable.

    I also appreciate your frequent updates -- it's not often that a good writer updates so frequently, and I'm eagerly waiting for more of this story.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on January 05, 2006
    Wonderful chapter, you keep getting better and better, if possible, with each update.
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  • From ANON - Sea on January 05, 2006
    That was a beautifully written love scene. I thought the use of the heart as a "safe zone" was especially touching. Very nicely done!
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on January 05, 2006
    Your lemons, while not graphic, were tender and sensitive and beautifully written. Well done!
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2006
    good story
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on January 04, 2006
    Boring!! There is nothing Boring about this fic. I think you've done a fine job crafting the storyline and I really like how you've portrayed Sevrus and Hermione's characters. I think the only way they are going to heal is with each other. They now can understand each other on a soul deep level. Good Job! I'm looking forward to reading chapter 9
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  • From ANON - sheila on January 04, 2006
    no you haven't lost anyone. We are all still here patiently awaiting our lemons. :0)
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  • From ANON - cearrae on January 04, 2006
    Just read chapters 1-8 - very well done but we could use a little more background. As to reviews - don't worry about the number. It's more important to write a good story that is appreciated.
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  • From ANON - Bobbi on January 04, 2006
    Here's a reviewer!
    I think you're writing an amazing, intense, and powerful work. You've handled some painful subjects very well. I'm looking forward to each new chapter.

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  • From ANON - firewall on January 04, 2006
    Ch 7 & 8 - Darn RL interferring with my reading...obviously you missed us too. lol Anyway, the chapters were amazing. I felt soooo sorry for poor Harry and Remus during their struggle. Nicely written.

    Now I am curious here. Has Hermione patched Severus up so his injury is now healed? Will this stop the weakness he feels and allow him to gain strength? I'm looking forward to your update.
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on January 04, 2006
    I have been following your story from the beginning and I apologise for not reviewing sooner. I really like your story but I do have a little constructive critizism. I find it a little disjointed in places, you need to make your story flow more smoothly between scene changes, and could you elaborate a bit more about what happened to find Hermione wandering a forest and Severus being held captive by deatheaters. As I have said earlier I really like your story, it has an interesting plot and a great deal of potential, so please keep going.
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - snapeluva on January 04, 2006
    Aaww, the last chapter made me cry. Poor Sevvie...to be beaten, broken and to relive it again and again...at least he knows that someone cares for him, even if he isn't completely comfortable with it.
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  • From ANON - Yabo on January 04, 2006
    I love this story. You have done a great job of allowing the reader to feel the emotion of the characters. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on January 04, 2006
    Wow!!! I just read your story. please continue. It is awesome. It is very graphic but also very well written. Keep up the good work. And there is no way in hell that this is a boring story!!
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