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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on November 16, 2006
    update please
    K.
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  • From ANON - XX on September 11, 2006
    Please continue soon!! I want to read more of your story, and how Severus and Harry get together!!
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  • From ANON - Raie on January 26, 2006
    Yeah! Good story line with lots of potential. Can't wait for more. Love Harry's "friend". What next? :)
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  • From ANON - Anijade on January 10, 2006
    Ok you have real potential but you really need a BETA you also need to pick a tense to write in. Most people prefer reading in past tense 3rd person. If you have any questions about what I have posted feel free to email me. Right now this story is very hard to read.
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  • From ANON - Sophia on January 10, 2006
    A marvelous story and I can' wait to read more; I really want to see what happens when Harry and Severus wake up, lol. Keep up the very good work and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - brittany on January 10, 2006
    wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jaima on January 10, 2006
    That was a riot!
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  • From ANON - Lakoma on January 10, 2006
    Decent start, however you are in need of a beta to correct spelling and grammar. You get your tenses mixed up from time to time. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Sal on January 10, 2006
    Ack... now you HAVE TO update soon! More more more!
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  • From ANON - Bif on January 04, 2006
    You need a grammar review. Please use whole sentences and don't change tenses.
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  • From ANON - brittany on January 03, 2006
    great update
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  • From ANON - Isadax on January 02, 2006
    What a start ! I 'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - brittany on December 30, 2005
    love this story
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on December 29, 2005
    hello! if you're looking for a beta, i'd be more than willing to take up the task. my email is mefoster@anderson.edu.
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  • From ANON - Gothic.Elf. on December 29, 2005
    I loved it! This sounds like it's going to be very halariouse and original! I'm even going to put it on my Favorit list! PLEASE continue!
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