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Reviews for The Sacrifice

By : LeoZodiac

From ANON - Rainien on December 29, 2005
Very good start. I'm certainly looking forward to more. I'll have to agree with Annie; more details will add *so* much more to your characters. Right now they seem somewhat...flat, I guess you could say. More details will add dimension to your characters, make them seem a bit more "real."
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From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
great story can't wait for cissa's reaction
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From ANON - PJ on December 29, 2005
Cool start this sounds very interesting please continue soon
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From ANON - Annie on December 29, 2005
Wow I really like this. You really need to intergrade more...feelings or thoughts of your characters, it'll make them seem real and give your story more depth. Other than that it is really very good and I hope you write more soon, Please and Thank You.

I hope your muse(s) is/are good to you.

Happy Writings.
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From ANON - lacquer on December 29, 2005
Nice!
Like it!
Continue...
MOREMOREMORE!!!
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From ANON - momoko on December 29, 2005
good chapter
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From ANON - mini pouce on December 29, 2005
Hello,
I looooooooooooove your fics!!!! I hope you will soon whrite the next chapter! How will Harry be with Draco? Will Harry be pregnant? I hope he will! Bye
mini pouce
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From Nomos421 on December 29, 2005
Nice!
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