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By : BrandonJackson
  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2006
    ok before i finish this chapter i just have toget this outa the way... replace 'men' with 'man' for crying out loud!!!!!!

    'oh men these are good' is so stupid

    its---- 'oh man, these are good'

    sorry if i sound rude *blushes*
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 29, 2005
    So what happens next? It's a little hard to read but its interesting. Have you thought about looking into a beta?
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  • From ANON - Slytheringirl on December 29, 2005
    Very interesting piece of writing, but also very rushed, could have been longer i think
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