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Reviews for Bad Bad Snape

By : papirionara2006
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - momo on September 01, 2006
    This was weird!
    Just read your story and your reviews. I have to say, my respect for swallowing all that harsh criticism!
    The basic writing style and gramma aside (enough has been said and you are definitely improving), I have to say I actually thought there was some rather original stuff about your story which irritated me and made me go in my head "ehy, this is just WEIRD" but I found it positive as well, because it had elements that I have not come across before. The first thing that stroke me as different to what happens in most fics of this kind was that Snape kicked her when she was on the floor. That was challenging me and I liked that. I like Snape dark and evil and brutal, but that was a new image suddenly invading my mind and surprising me. I'm not sure if I liked it but it definitely had an effect, which is a good thing.
    I think that was quite brave of you to involve and describe actions that where not stuff that you have read in other stories as well so you knew people are ok with that. This story had a few bits that really weren
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on January 26, 2006
    demented
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  • From ANON - angel on January 05, 2006
    wow that was great and im glad the mione is there for snape and they can learn to love each other .. i cant wait in till you next story and in till then later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Applekissis on January 05, 2006
    Okkkk...I am just speechless..i dont know what to say
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  • From Applekissis on January 04, 2006
    Hmmm.....very intresting chapter
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  • From ANON - Sigh on January 04, 2006
    "except the soft snoring of two people laying together as they clanged to each other." Clanged? Dictionary definition:
    1. A loud, resonant, metallic sound.
    2. The strident call of a crane or goose.
    BETA, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Applekissis on January 04, 2006
    bad Lucius and Draco...they are so freaky...lol
    Great chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - angel on January 04, 2006
    wow i hope he cant change her mind in time .. ans what are you going to do mione ...please please update soon ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Applekissis on January 03, 2006
    Hi...Just wanted to say that I like this story...it was funny to read the whole huge penis pouche in stomach thingy,but as for the story its self i think its pretty okay for a first try...
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  • From ANON - Denise on January 03, 2006
    well, i can definatley say that this chapter is better than the first few. thats goo. Your writing is improving!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2006
    It's terrific that you are planning to read some of the Harry Potter books. Read them all!
    I would be interested in reading a story that you had put some serious effort into it. Keep trying.
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  • From ANON - Denise on January 02, 2006
    well, i have been reading your story, and the reviews you have been getting. So, I realize that the advice I am going to give you will be a lot like the other advie you have been getting, but I feel compelled to give it to you anyway.

    1. Before writing, make an outline of the story. Write out all teh things that you want to happen in the story, how you will split it up into chapters, and then how you will end it. This will help you because when you go back to write the actual chapters, you will have a reference of sorts, so you know what you are going to write.

    2. Try reading some of teh other stories, so you have an idea of how ot build the plot etc. I would recoomend that you rad soem of the stories written by:
    *Corazon- her stories are really good!!!
    *Ms_Figg - her storeis are great too, and she updates really quick, so you wouldnt have to wait too much for an update
    (THose are th etwo main authors whose stories i keep a close tab on.....)

    3. If you have trouble coming up wiht a good plot on you own, try to write a story based on a challenge (you could try some of WIKTT's challenges.....), becayuse in the challegnes, the rules pretty much lay out how the story should be written....and all the things you should include.

    Lastly, I would like to say that you shouldn't feel really bad about your writing skills now. Everyone starts out bad, it is just those people who try to do better that will get better. So if you really like writing fan fic, than read a few stories, read the hp series, and possibly get a beta.....(If you would like, I wouldnt mind betaing your next story. e mail me about it if you are interstred: sexibabe919@yahoo.com).
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  • From ANON - Damn you on January 02, 2006
    It's known in the past that there was a guy who had a 13.5 inch penis. Maybe Snape was one of them. ;)
    (wishful thinking)

    Yeah, you need to get a Beta for real. But I guess you heard that too often it doesn't really matter anymore.

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