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Reviews for One Stormy Night

By : mistressmeo
  • From ANON - on July 25, 2016

    This was a beautiful story, and very realistic. If the characters existed in real life this is 90% probably what would happen. I dont think they could ever fall in love and be happy, it would be too complicated and one would have to sacrifice for the other. They would be happy together but it wouldnt be enough. None of them would ever leave their friends and family without feeling guilt and feeling incomplete, thats why they can never be together. They would be like drugs to each other, too much and they could overdose and die.

    Brilliant. :)

    (Yes i know its eleven years later sice you  wrote this, but better late than never ;) thats the good thing with writting. It lives on.


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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 08, 2007
    I really liked this....great atmosphere..and I don't really think Draco was terribly OOC considering the context and events. Good job : )
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  • From wudelfin on August 24, 2007
    so beautifull sad when one doesn't fight for what is rightly yours.
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on August 07, 2007
    Whew, /fans face, that was totally HOT!
    Well done ;-D
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  • From ANON - allie on November 27, 2006
    please update
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  • From ANON - casey on February 02, 2006
    awesome. i love this story.
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 31, 2006
    OMG that was the best story!! I loved it!!

    I just really wanted to let you know I think you have heaps of talent, and I really hope you keep writing.

    Take care@
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  • From ANON - t on January 28, 2006
    this is an amazing story!!!
    please continue
    i love it!!!!
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  • From ANON - jaynee on January 27, 2006
    Oh. My. Lord. That was one of the best pieces I've ever read. I'm not usually one for short stories or one shots [is that one word or two?] but despite the length and all, the flow of the words just drew me in like you couldn't imagine. I could literally see the storm out the window of my mind's eye. All in all, it was an amazing piece and I'm looking forward to more in the future.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on January 26, 2006
    Oh... that was sad. But very good. I liked it, it just made me sad.
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  • From ANON - UKK on January 22, 2006
    oh, *sadly sighs* this was so sweet I can't help but wish you gave me an alternate happy ending. Hermione wants to be an unpredictable storm right? sooo, maybe she would be if Malfoy became her thunder...oops that sounds kind of dirty. lol. I am very pleased that I foudn this shot, and hope that you write more because you are too damn good, what an imagination!
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  • From ble on January 18, 2006
    I found your author's page on the AFF forums. Lucky me! :) I loved this so much. The end just killed me... so sad, but in a weird sweet way. The storm as a plot device was just lovely. (I love storms, too) :) Very well written, believable dialogue. The tension was as palatable as the lightening would be. The only thing that kind of distracted me for a minute was the change in font from regular to italics. Don't know if this has already been mentioned, as I haven't read the other reviews. (bad me lol) Off to my author's page to add this one to my rec. reading... hope to read more of your work soon! :)
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  • From ANON - alli on January 17, 2006
    that was hot
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  • From ANON - Olivia on January 17, 2006
    well.... that was good ... i liked it
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
    Wow! Thank you for the very well written piece. I really enjoyed the builtup and let down. Very much in character for Hermione. Draco was strog but sensative without losing all that is Draco. Wonderful! i like it as a one shot!
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