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Reviews for The Longest Year

By : YesterdaysFeelings
  • From ANON - Magz on June 27, 2006
    Wow, so i really liked it that hermoine wore an AFI t shirt, thats sweet, Your chapters are short but if you keep updating often people wont mind that they are short.. Keep writing :P

    Magz
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on June 27, 2006
    Great story
    Good job editing it
    It seems much better now
    Oh how I love spite and revenge!
    It's just so exciting
    Might want to take the story out of Hermione/Draco
    Just go to your Author Panel
    Click Edit Story
    Then choose the story and edit details
    You should be able to change it there
    And don't worry,you have the potential to do just as good if not better than me at any story
    It's all about plot
    Update soon

    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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  • From ANON - Curliusa on February 13, 2006
    Well, there are some good elements to your story. I'd suggest slowingdown the plot a bit, and working on character development. Also, think about getting a beta reader, or at least proofreading it yourself.
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on January 07, 2006
    Colin has bad taste!
    Haha...insteresting chapter.
    Hermione scares me...
    She's really clingyishh
    Good story.
    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX

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  • From ANON - Hunidew on January 05, 2006
    Good story so far! But I'm just wondering if this story is in the right section? Or is it building up from a HG/Hp to a DM/HG? Either way the story is great
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  • From ANON - Cas on January 05, 2006
    AHHH GOD MY EYES ARE BURNING I CANT BELIVE YOU MADE COLIN DO THAT hahahahahah still good chapter..hmm your getting better at your sex scenes though ..5
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on January 02, 2006
    Haha,nice Andiee.
    How kinky,
    Sex on a train on the way to school
    I can't even pronounce Eduardo's last name haha.
    Keep up the good work.
    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y-xX
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  • From ANON - Cas on December 31, 2005
    I feel a threesome comming on hahahaha
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  • From ANON - Cas on December 30, 2005
    LoL Poor kitty and the being trapped in Dudleys butt hahahahaha ..Did it live? AMAZING RAIN!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    Good start!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    its a good start. i think u cold make an interesting story out of it. update soon.
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