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Reviews for What He Wants

By : normaljean2
  • From ANON - firewall on December 31, 2005
    Ch 4 - Omigod, that was a very hot scene. Where on earth are you going from here?
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  • From Angie30 on December 31, 2005
    Extreamly Hot! *Fans face*
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 31, 2005
    Ch 3 - Tricky little devil that Severus is...getting her all het up and then that's it! Hahahaha he is smooth.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on December 31, 2005
    I'm loving this story very much! Look forward to when you update
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  • From ANON - Nyxx on December 31, 2005
    Just finished the first chapter and I like your writing style very much. I can definitely see his longing for her but why doesn't she have more confidence in herself? She seemed shocked in the end of this chapter that he would have an erection in reaction to her contact... which is odd since Krum wanted her, and snogged her before- so it wasn't her first kiss. Ron wants her, and Cormac Mclaggen ravashed her under the mistletoe. She's pretty and intelligent- more than enough to attract the likes of Snape. Harry would also fight it I think- more so than Ron even, since Harry has had to endure the brunt of Severus' cruelty. Even so I really enjoyed this first chapter. I love AU as much as canon based stories. Will read the rest later!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2005
    This looks to be so much fun!
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  • From ANON - Cristie on December 31, 2005
    hhhhhhmmmmmmmmmm loved that third chapter. Hated where you ended it though. I think I am going to be more frustrated than Hermione. Please don't leave us hanging for too long.
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  • From on December 31, 2005
    I love it. Plzzzz write more soon. It's really good. Plzzz update soon.
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  • From ANON - GaiaAthena on December 31, 2005
    I'm thrilled to hear that...two more great chapters! The anticipation is building...
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 31, 2005
    Ch 2 - Ah the plot thickens...Ron suddenly and typically wants what he can no longer have...the Yule ball and Viktor Krum and Hermione anyone?...and now decides he can have Hermione if he sets his mind to it. Harry is very rational here and I loved his comment that he had talked to Snape and was okay with it...besides he'd kill him if he hurt her. lol

    Looking forward to you next update.
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  • From ANON - SiriuslySevered on December 31, 2005
    Just two chapters and I'm addicted to your story!

    More, please!
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  • From ANON - DDMalfoy on December 31, 2005
    I recall this story from a long time ago, but it was never finished. I'm hoping that you are reposting this because you have finished it. I'd hate to get my hopes up for something still not finished.
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  • From ANON - Cristie on December 31, 2005
    I loved this chapter. Severus is just so intense and passionate. Oh how I would love to be Hermione! Update soon!! Please!!!
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  • From ANON - GaiaAthena on December 31, 2005
    Very nice...looking forward to your next installment.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 31, 2005
    An interesting start to your story. You write well and keep the interest of the reader captivated. Nicely done. I'm looking forward to watching this story develop.
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