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Reviews for What He Wants

By : normaljean2
  • From Shellnet on November 09, 2017

    More than a decade you can write the next chapter please this is so funny i love it come back


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 09, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on January 27, 2006
    wow snape is quite the seducer I'd love to have a male bewitch and ensnare me like this
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  • From ANON - Melissa on January 06, 2006
    I heard about your story when somebody recommended it to me (I think this was on WIKTT). I have to say, it's well-written, interesting, and just so good. I'm glad you've updated, and I can't wait to read more of this awesome story. So please hurry up and update again soon! I'll give you a cookie if you do! *Tries to entice you with a cookie* Oooh, a cookie! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Ginger on January 06, 2006
    Nice done!!! I like the character snape represents in your story. So possessive, but at the same time willing to accept her decisions!!! Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - belladonnacordial on January 06, 2006
    First off, I love your name and absolutely adore Zorro the Gay Blade. Have really enjoyed this story so far. I can't say I'm a Ron fan, but really like him in this role of other man/comic relief. Your Severus and Hermione are delicious in their own rights and are just fabulous together. You have written their passion for one another so very well indeed. If there were something to criticize I'd mention it here. Unfortunately there is no denying this huge smile you have plastered on my face - see? I look just like this! : ) Thank you for a joy of a read. I look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - Donavon on January 04, 2006
    I have only just found your story. Talk about hot! It sizzles.
    Brilliant interplay between all your characters. Very well written.
    It has gone on my favourites, and hope for a update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on January 02, 2006
    I love how, for at least a short time, Hermione and Severus share a [wonderful] secret just between the two of them. I do think your portrayal of Harry and Hermione's friendship and loyalty is pretty accurate, but something drastic had to have happened during the rest of the war with Voldemort to change Harry's opinion of Snape, especially quelling his anger enough for Harry to be comfortable enough with Snape to support Hermione marrying "The Git". I know this is pre HBP, but still it's a strech. Having said that, I still accept your Harry and definitely the rest of this great story! I'm anxious to see Harry's and Ron's reactions. Thanks for the chapters!
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  • From ANON - K on January 02, 2006
    oooooooh update, love the story, just read all of it.
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 02, 2006
    Ch 1 - I was just checking out the first chapter again because a comment was niggling at the back of my mind and I found it. I sincerely hope that this never comes to light to Ron or anyone else because it will cause all sorts of problems. Before the relationship began, Severus was thinking:

    She was to be his payment for services rendered, though he would never tell her such a thing. He actually respected her far too much to let such an archaic idea spill from his lips in her presence.

    Can you just imagine what will happen if Ron gets hold of this thought?! It also shows how far Snape has come in his relationship with her.
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  • From ANON - firewall on January 02, 2006
    Ch 7 - Severus is falling quite nicely into the married routine, isn't he? lol Loved the rhyme that Hermione made up. Now Ron...he did well waiting and his strategy is perfect but he forgot to take into consideration others were involved...You can't control everything. Mind you Severus seems to be doing an admirable job at directing things. Another wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on January 02, 2006
    That was brilliant. I loved it. I can't wait till you continue.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on January 02, 2006
    *Grins* This chapter was great and hot! LOL I knew Ron was being stupid but yeesh, He is in for quite a shock when he finds out she already married Snape.
    I hope he does try and touch her I want to see the little pain get a jolt *evil little grin* . Keep up the great work and I look forward to another great update.
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  • From ANON - septentrion on January 02, 2006
    ch 7 : I'm so glad to see the story wasn't abandoned. Sure things are going to be interesting with Ron.
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