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By : Samaelthekind
  • From Gabriella on January 31, 2006
    EEEEEp!!!!!!!!! Just a quick writer-to-writer note!! It never quite works when the word "globe(s)" are used to describe an ass or breast(s). A globe is perfectly round, not a half sphere attached to anything. Much better to use "rounded, swell, muscled, lean, firm, lush... etc..." ass/breast(s). Unless the person in question got too close to a weed wacker doing something REALLY kinky that I wish to know nothing about, it is unnecessary to outline the fact of that anatimical bit-o'-love being naturally as it is. Adding description helps readers picture just HOW the article in question may look, ie) fit, tight, lax, flabby, muscled, squeeze-that-please-'cause-if-you-don't-"I"-will!! Whatever... Just thought I might add my 2 cents... Pardon the English rant, you inadvertantly struck a nerve...

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    Incidentally... Dear GOD, FUCKING H.O.T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    (Sets up Samayel shrine & begins burning incense in a tiny intricately carved Chinese Jade burner...) HEM!!! Thank you... ^.--
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 31, 2006
    Holy moly! Need chapter 32! That was awesome!
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  • From ANON - Chiaki Dark on January 31, 2006
    Dear Gods and Goddesses above! I had almost had a heart attack-that was SO hot!!
    O_O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    The visuals were just too much! First off-I almost wet myself at Harry's outfit! Usually,
    the "new wardrobe" drill is that Harry wears a silk, emerald shirt... yaddayaddayadda.
    But NOT your Harry! He's in ALL black and his hair!! GAH....... I mimicked Draco. My
    brain went dead. n_n And second... it was such a turn on how you left the boys mostly
    dressed for their love scene! Draco's thong-eeeee!! And the rim job! This chapter was
    so kinky-romantic it was devine! Thanks for sharing again. Please let Harry wear the
    outfit just a little bit longer?? And maybe there could be a scene where Draco dresses
    in another slutty thong for Harry and we see how "Boy Wonder" deals with that??
    *beams* Fantastic job!!
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  • From ANON - Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn on January 31, 2006
    (Watery smile) Beautiful... utterly beautiful... (Glomps Samayel) That was so BEAUTIFUL!!!! (Starts bawling...) No, just kidding, but--yeah... that's what I call ideal. Beautiful, perfect, dreamlike... To love as such is/should be, the ultimate goal of humanity. Never mind all this sodding WAR!!!!! (Fist pounds table in pissed off irritation.) *cough* Yes, well... I believe so anyway... Hem!! ^.--
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  • From ANON - MagicChic82 on January 31, 2006
    Wow! A whole chapter without dialogue! Good job! ;) lol. Has your mood been different the last couple days? I can't place it, but your style seems a little "off" the last two chapters. Still good stuff, and obviously you...did your puppy die? J/K!! I hope this didn't happen! O.O
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  • From ANON - ura on January 30, 2006
    nice happy chapter.
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  • From ANON - lizzy on January 30, 2006
    I've been following this story for a while now, and I must say that I am quite enjoying it. You are a remarkable and coherent writer. I also just wanted to point out that Madam Malkin's is in Diagon Alley, not Hogsmeade. The clothing store in Hogsmeade is called Gladrags.
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  • From ANON - Chiaki Dark on January 30, 2006
    Well call me tickled and slap me silly!!
    That was a FANTASTIC romantic follow up to that last steamy chapter.
    Gosh-some of those scenes made my heart ache. And I love that you
    put that bit where the boys just HOLD each other. My romantic soul has
    been happily fed. I absolutely cannot wait for Pansy's Slytherin hosted
    bash. It'd be a GREAT place to debut Harry in his new wardrobe, would it
    not? *nudges you and winks* And maybe... there could be an after
    party for two and Draco's new itty bitty undies??? n_n HEH. Ohhhhhh
    it's gonna be good. Even when the angst comes-cause that's life, right?-
    I'm going to always look forward to your romance. Brava, author! Till
    your next update!! *waves the HarryxDraco banner beaming*
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 30, 2006
    Well done! I loved that their dinner went so well. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - swampthang on January 30, 2006
    Another great chapter. Give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 30, 2006
    Need chapter 31! I love their relationship! Perfect! They are truly meant for each other!
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  • From ANON - a dragonbreath on January 30, 2006
    Is "Brief Respite" chapter 29 or chapter 30? Maybe you should have just made chapter 11a chapter 11 and made chapter 11b chapter 12...
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  • From ANON - Heidi on January 29, 2006
    Just read chapter 29... by the way, I can't remember this room being so hot before. Think I need a shower, a COLD one... phew!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 29, 2006
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 30! McGonagall is going to have a fit!
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  • From ANON - Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn on January 29, 2006
    GAH!!! WATERY adulation!! WATERY!!!! Use the RIGHT words why don't I.... Well, dunno really. Why DID I? Dunno... *snicker* ^.--
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