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By : Ravenkiss2000
  • From ANON - Drawfire on January 14, 2006
    Is the voice Black?

    I'm hooked! This is great! And poor Sevvie! His hands... *holds them gently and strokes them* Poor guy...

    Continue soon please! ^_^
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  • From ANON - angel on January 14, 2006
    man ... poor harry ... poor remus ... poor snape ... i how harry does tell somone and who is this friend.. please please please update soon ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - yaoigirl on January 14, 2006
    hi, i love you, thanks for this chapter is greate, i love him, relly, specially because albus understood how bad have he been whit severus over the years. go on please
    i'm weiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - winterineden on January 14, 2006
    Eloquent and well written! I was pulled into this story and quickly read all available chapters. I love the hints of humor in the first chapter. However, in the explanation of Severas' dislike for breakfast you wrote "mush" when I think you meant "much". I hope you continue this work as so many story that start well are never finished, and I do like the direction you seem to be heading with this. If I could make a suggestion, it would be to slow down. Your vocabulary is amazing, and I feel a little more could be used in discriptions and even dialog. In some places this seems rushed. But sometimes with ideas racing through your head it is hard for fingers to keep up on the keyboard. Slow the pace just a bit.
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  • From ANON - nessSachiel on January 12, 2006
    oooooooooooooooooooooo
    what a wonderfull, wonderfull fic ^__^
    poor Snape. Poor Hagrid....and poor Harry when Severus will find out hahaha
    good job, girl! :*
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    More please, i want to read more
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  • From ANON - Katie K on January 08, 2006
    Ohh poor Severus! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - angel on January 08, 2006
    wow poor snape.... and who is this friend of harry's that is telling hime to do this .. please please please please update soon and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2006
    correcting : ny =by, oner =over, how =who
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  • From ANON - www.brujita712@hotmail.com on January 07, 2006
    look i know you like make snape suffer, that is one of the things that i love abaut your fics, but since in the real book he is so humiliated ny the fucking marauders, i really hate that someone thoes the same in a fic, i'm not seying that i dislake this fic far from it, i just said, MAKE PAID THAT LITLLE SHIT HOW PLAY THE PRANK, make him suffer, that he root in the hell.

    geez i oner reacted but i really think that is too much wors a humiliation that some phisic damage, specialy for someone like snape, ahh and if you can please make see the headmaster that he is making a mistake not punishing someone, i mean this maybe don't help to stop the pranks but will show severus that he is important , not that as ussual he don't matter.
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  • From ANON - Oyness on January 07, 2006
    It's the friggin ghost of either Black or James Potter! That line about existing gives it away!

    Someone call the Excorcist!

    Btw, why DID Severus not retire from that mad house? (Madhouse because it's run by the head Mad Hatter Albus. *snorts*)
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  • From ANON - snapeXalbus on January 03, 2006
    Yes! (I've always loved your works as not many do Snape/Albus stories and that is my favorite pairing no matter the rating or genre. Mwahaaaa. Eh.. and thank you for leaving thsi pretty much HBP-free. Snape did NOT murder Albus--damnit! NO! F* Way! Killed him, yeh... murder, no.)

    I hope Snape is the MPREG? Dominated!Snape is the best...especially when he gets his revenge in the end.

    Oh, loved the hair dye. lol. Rotten little buggers pranking their savior. May they rot in detention.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 02, 2006
    wow please more .... please update soon

    angel
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