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Reviews for A Drunken Mistake

By : xsexxandxcandyx
  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
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  • From ck75 on January 18, 2006
    I LOVE IT!! i jus read the whole thing today and i cant wait for you to continue!!!! could u possibly email me wen u update? if not ill jus keep checkin...

    once again....I LOOOOOOVE IT!!! hehe =)
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  • From ANON - paula on January 17, 2006
    damn you are fast, like it, you know i do, i will keep reading, i want find out who the father is.bye bye
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  • From ANON - Anna on January 16, 2006
    shit, i guess this is why my mum tells me to wear my glasses...well the up above review was um from me rasie14 lol u can email me of course if you liked... anybody serisouly i have no life right now...my man at a army base! *weeps*
    kk wont bother you all now

    Anna
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  • From ANON - rasie14@hotmail.com on January 16, 2006
    Hey, lol my lil Graco , "the bouncing feret" should have more a less explained his tourment i mean ...you could have a whole new story on this well on draco's physcological mindset...i.e. the belief that woman are just sex and well we know what lucius thinks of the weasleys, try giving draco depth to what he's saying to ginny. I mean dialogue is just words if there's no reason to them. Here ill give you an example k (promise not to laugh)

    Draco stared at the new team mate, that Puddlemere United had sighned up just two days ago. Every ounce of enegry ripped and tore inside him to see her womanly curves, her red hair...thoes eyes...that smile. It made draco want to roll up and die to see her standing there laughing, laughing with another man that wasn't him. Draco however smiled, it was unusual for him to smile...from the tourmenting pain he was still dealing with, "At least she's not with Potter." said draco to no one inparticluar. (please no one steal that)

    it gives more reason to his reactions, Ginny doesnt nescarily need to know everything dracos thinking, it makes him more misunderstood and mysterious. i mean you wrote that ginny was like a drug to him...well ginny doesnt need to know that and it might even cause more friction between the characters...Personally i dont think Ginny understands Draco herself. but more to the point of ginny being a drug to him...sometimes doing is way more Powerfully then saying. I guess for me personally i thought draco was a bit of blabbering git with that long dialogue i have always seen draco as a man who keeps his feelings to himslef.

    Okay so i have blabbered on about depth in characterisation and the next bit!

    there are two reasons why i have forgiven your spelling mistakes:
    1. you do update fast
    2. my fave name is kayla lol... i would call my future daughter kayla but her godmother most likely would be my bf's bestfriends girlfriend and her names kayla
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  • From ANON - Cas on January 16, 2006
    Awee its so mushiee and cuteeeeee hehe see you at school
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  • From ANON - Anna on January 15, 2006
    Hey,
    well done so far i am enjoying the story, though i must admit i think ginny would have thought about where she would go, what she would do....you sorta think of that naturally when you find out your pregnant at the very start...but maybe thats just me. but i like the fact that your story doesnt have ginny get a round tummy in the first month...you've pretty much made ginny's pregnancy realistic which is really cool and it must have been hard not to have rushed your story along...i like the fact that Draco is so afriad of the love he has for ginny and he is only realising it now! i am so glad that you made harry react in the way he did to be honest i have always seen harry being extremly rash and unthoughtful when it comes to dealing with situtations that are most definately out of his hands. . . okay i am one of thoes people that hates harry being perfect and extremly nice...i mean yeah you made him a human man especially a human man...maybe you should have added the whore part lol into his dialogue then ginny could take those hormones right out on to harry and slap him hard!

    there are some typo mistakes but i mean we know what you mean with "Graco," its ment to be draco ...hehe but i must let you know that i now feel like i should call draco, Graco for a nickname. ("Oh Graco your so damn grumpy , grumpy bum Graco")



    Well thats my Review Keep the good work up and take your time...


    Anna
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  • From ANON - Cas on January 15, 2006
    DIRTY DRACO!!
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  • From ANON - Tarra on January 15, 2006
    Okay I like it ... I hope that you'll update it soon so that I'll know what's going to end up happening!
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  • From ANON - Steph on January 14, 2006
    I love itt. I think it's better tan the old one. And I agree with Cas. Harry is a bitch!!! He dosent have to be so mena. Stupid poopy face. Can't wait for more
    Love Me
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  • From ANON - Paula on January 14, 2006
    OK.first of all I loved the twist. loved cold draco and his heartchanges.SO DRACO. also ginny's plan. I'm so curios about what's about to happen. Sorry for not rewieing any sooner, but I'm always checking if you had written some mor, okis bye bye, love the new chapters.
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  • From ANON - Cas on January 14, 2006
    OMG HARRYS A BITCH!! *Stabbs* :P
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  • From ANON - Cas on January 13, 2006
    :O Dracos a bitch! meh I still love him hehe Write more the suspence is killing mee
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  • From ANON - emmalee on January 12, 2006
    i really enjoyed it..cant wait to hear more like when potter finds out and stuff...
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  • From ANON - Cas on January 12, 2006
    Hehe Wonderful way to bring in the new year...I told you Ginny and Draco somehow make a cute couple LoL..And sorry I didn't came to school hehe I had to catch up on my sleep I wouldn't wake up in the morning
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