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Reviews for The Lioness of Gryffindor

By : CDQ
  • From ANON - rox4787 on January 13, 2006
    love it love it love it cant wait to read more please please update soon
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  • From ANON - Donna on January 10, 2006
    So far my review will be on the first chapter. Your writing style isn't at all bad. My problem with the story so far is the plot. It comes across as a bit trite and geered toward getting HG and DM in the most simplistic and obvious of ways. Why would any one believe Narcissa? Why are RW and HP acting like complete Asses over something HG can't control. I got to go but email me if you want.
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  • From ANON - Alex on January 05, 2006
    This is a good start! keep up the great work..

    Although the summary could use a little more.. work..
    but keep working on it!
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  • From ANON - Krystyn on January 04, 2006
    Wow. This is a really interesting start! ^_^ I can't wait to see how Draco and Hermione come to like each other.
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  • From ANON - rush22 on January 04, 2006
    sorry to hear that you got some bad reviews, it happens to the best so try not to worry about it. i think that you have good potential with the story though it feels like it needs a little more substance to it in some places. keep up the good work and i look foward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Cameo976 on January 02, 2006
    Hi. I loved your first chapter. It showed what had happened without droning on about the past and yet still left an open mind for what was still to come. A great first chapter, if your next chapters are as good as the first, then I shall continue to follow them until the end! Thanks! Cameo
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