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Reviews for Dark as my Intentions

By : DarkJuliet
  • From ANON - DarkJuliet on January 28, 2006
    This is an addendum to my last post: A continuation story with "Persephone" has now been posted on the male/female board under the title "Beneath a Cunning Eye".
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  • From ANON - DarkJuliet on January 27, 2006
    Hi Nanaea and Screamguy - Actually.......I'm knee deep in another story featuring "Persephone" and, well, there's a very good chance that she will make a reappearance on the boards here (just not under the Snape/OFC header) sometime soon.
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  • From Nanaea on January 27, 2006
    Awesome story! Loved the imagery - very sensual. I would love to know how he knew her true name (and what it was), but if you're finished, you're finished. I can respect that.
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  • From ANON - screamguy on January 26, 2006
    Are you really going to end it like that? Argh! Oh the frustration, beautifully done yes, but how did he know her true name? Oh the suspense is killing me.Well written once again but man, this seems like a continuation is needed. Or maybe its just me, heh. Also, what does Harry Potter have to do with the storyline? Merely a token object of forbidden desire?
    Well I guess I'll never know . . . .
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  • From Angie30 on January 12, 2006
    CHapter 3-Excellent! What a way to end a story!
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  • From ANON - DarkJuliet on January 11, 2006
    Thanks Screamguy, Snape's Pet and Undenialbly_Raziel, for all the positive feedback. The last two chapters almost wrote themselves - the idea elves and fairies really perked up and sort of took over and, before I knew it, a chapter had been written, then two. I've got all sorts of ideas churning about in the old brain now. Now, to find time and energy to sit down and write.
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  • From PhoenixxRiising on January 11, 2006
    Damn. I was just checking to see if you had written anything else. Too bad for me...
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  • From PhoenixxRiising on January 11, 2006
    That was great. I am glad you contemplated on more ideas to come up with two additional chapters. I was dissappointed when you said it was only to be a one-shot, but I was pleasantly suprised. The suspense was just enough to keep you on the edge of your seat. I usually don't read stories from the first point of view, but you handeled it wonderfully. Too bad its completed....
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  • From Angie30 on January 07, 2006
    The suspense is so great! Love this story so much! Glad you came up with more ideas. Keep writing I'm on pins and needles to find out what happens next. Well done!
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  • From screamguy on January 02, 2006
    Wow here is a fic with an OFC that is actually interesting. I commend you on a well written fic, your vocabulary and use of description is exceptional, and I really enjoyed how you incorporated the explanation of why there would be vampires at Hogwarts seamlessly. It actually makes SENSE. Also that one last bit at the end was a nice touch . . . Lemonade . . lol.
    But as a word of advice if you continue on with this please do not let your OFC turn into a Mary Sue, many good authors have made this crucial mistake! It would be so disappointing to see such a promising fic crash and burn.
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  • From PhoenixxRiising on January 02, 2006
    I liked it! Very interesting perspective. Hopefully you'll update soon!


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