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Reviews for Love Potion No. 13

By : harriet
  • From ANON - hypatia cade on August 19, 2006
    End was a little random. But all around it was a good story.
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  • From ANON - Amaya on August 04, 2006
    For being one of your first it is really good. I can see the differences between this one and your recent ones though. There are not as many twists in the plot or things happening that make me go
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  • From ANON - heksie on June 24, 2006
    Well that was a short fic - great love it i th end!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 19, 2006
    Loved it! Glad AFF works again!
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  • From ANON - Ansku on June 12, 2006
    Sweet :)
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  • From ANON - woffles on February 12, 2006
    it feels like there should be 15 instead of 14 chappys its like chappy14 was skipped over.
    that last scene was hot
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  • From ANON - xikum on February 12, 2006
    I liked the story line, it was both unique and very intrigueing- not just 'different', but very interesting. Yet the ending, as you yourself said, was too abrupt. Have you ever considered re-working it? You did an amazing job of keeping them in character, which a lot of people don't do very well.
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  • From ANON - nightangel on January 18, 2006
    more it just seems to short. What happens next.

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  • From ANON - wendy on January 14, 2006
    I think an animagus form of a bat would be cool. Imagine the people (Dursleys & such) you could freak out by claiming/appearing to be a vampire
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  • From ANON - Wildfire on January 12, 2006
    I liked this story in fact I loved it all, untill the sudden ending! You should either make a second or continue this one you left a lot untold. Or at least delate voldy from this story. That's the biggest thing you left undone.

    Wildfire
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  • From ANON - BP on January 10, 2006
    Wasn't crap at all. I liked it. A. LOT. Espescially the last two chapters! :D
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  • From ANON - n0b0dys_ang31 on January 06, 2006
    It has potential.. maybe an added scene of the bonding, some rewording, another chapter in between 13 and 14 and it'll be really good
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  • From ANON - Kimmy on January 06, 2006
    great! ^_^.... I really like the idea with the bats, although I must admid to the fact I know nothing of them o_0
    Sev's personality is great.... and you also did Charlie good ^-^
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  • From ANON - renee on January 05, 2006
    I like the story so far. Will continue reading. I just wanted to comment: Why didn't anyone use Wingardium Leviosa or something like that?
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on January 05, 2006
    I think you are miles to hard on yourself. The story line was very good,
    loved the fact they were soul mates within their Animagi. O.k. I admit not up to recent
    standards but I would be proud to call it one of mine.

    P.s. don't wipe any others give up another treat.
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